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lucky
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0 posted 03-15-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

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1 posted 03-15-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

very nice, perfection of pondering...
loved the imagery in this...
take care,jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
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2 posted 03-15-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hello lucky so glad to see you
it has been a long time and your
dream of wandering I have been there
in a different room but with the same leftover wondering what or why and not
being sure except to know that yesterday's gone and I'm glad you straightened the
old dried flowers on the vestibule
   and I have missed you
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 03-16-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

~*Lucky*~
and I feel I am just that at having you drop by
visiting with old friends or with old memories
is such a pleasant way to wile the
hours of sweet contentment
don't wait for an invitation
come on by anytime you
are in my neighborhood
bring fresh flowers
and remember to
clean your feet
before entering
these  halls
lovely dust
you have
stirred to
fresh awakening
we'll toss a cold one
~*Marge*~


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