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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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0 posted 2000-03-15 03:28 PM


I'm sorry




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-03-15 05:53 PM


very nice, perfection of pondering...
loved the imagery in this...
take care,jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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2 posted 2000-03-15 06:25 PM


Hello lucky so glad to see you
it has been a long time and your
dream of wandering I have been there
in a different room but with the same leftover wondering what or why and not
being sure except to know that yesterday's gone and I'm glad you straightened the
old dried flowers on the vestibule
   and I have missed you

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-03-16 12:36 PM


~*Lucky*~
and I feel I am just that at having you drop by
visiting with old friends or with old memories
is such a pleasant way to wile the
hours of sweet contentment
don't wait for an invitation
come on by anytime you
are in my neighborhood
bring fresh flowers
and remember to
clean your feet
before entering
these  halls
lovely dust
you have
stirred to
fresh awakening
we'll toss a cold one
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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