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Marina
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0 posted 03-15-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina

My Hearts Hope


I long to smell your cologne
upon my pillow each night
to know I no longer need dream
now that your are here and with me

I wish to gently touch your cheek
my fingertips softly brushing your skin
making your whole body tremble
with desire for me

I want to hear you say
we are strongest as one
and if we should part
lost would be your soul from within

I hope I can make you see
my heart has room for only for one
so tell me please
it is all my heart hopes

© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-15-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Lovely poem Marina
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-15-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

wow, very sweet and tender poem, lots of emotion and desire expressed well,
I have seen several poems like this today, I guess the poets are really full of passion in here (smile)
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


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3 posted 03-15-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wow, seems kindof romantic.   James
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4 posted 03-15-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

The hallway from the wishing well to the waiting room seems to take for ever to travel

Rex}<{{{{o>
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5 posted 03-15-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sweet longings!  

Denise
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6 posted 03-15-2000 07:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Beautiful display of emotions, Marina.
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7 posted 03-15-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Thanks to all of you.

Marina
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Marina,

*Sigh*. . . you really got me with this one. . . it's really very good. . . I can almost smell your perfume and feel your longing. . .

Wonderful my *innocent* friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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9 posted 03-15-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Ohh...
The emotions I feel with this one are all too familiar~
Your poem is simply beautiful~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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10 posted 03-16-2000 02:27 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, thank you...and I'm glad you know how innocent I really am!

Marie,thank you for you kind words

Marina
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11 posted 03-16-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Janet Marie,forgot to ask so....???

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-16-2000).]
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Marina, this is very lovely and wanting. A real deversion from your other works I must say.

Parker
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13 posted 03-16-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina. . .

Yes, I do. . . how could I not?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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14 posted 03-16-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

James,thanks. Yes it is different for me....a whim I think.Nice of you to take the time to respond to my poem.  In between Margarita's?? Well I'm sure you will be pleased to know our Canadian nights have been heating up since you've been gone!

Sven,I just wondered because you know that I am very shy and sometimes have trouble expressing myself.

Marina

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Um. . . excuse me Marina??

What did you say?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marina
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16 posted 03-17-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Well Sven you know it is not easy for me to be so blunt and to the point when I am very shy.

Marina
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17 posted 03-18-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven I'm shocked...no smart comment??

Marina
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Marina--

Who am I to disappoint?

I think that one would need to only go to Adult to see how shy and not blunt you really are!!    

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Marina~
Lovely thoughts on display.
Longing emotions.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
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20 posted 03-18-2000 02:16 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, I do believe you know me just a little too well!

Marge, thank you for your compliments.

Marina
Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 03-18-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

marina, I love passionate poetry, so you know I loved this one!
Liz
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Marina. . .

Do I really?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marina
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23 posted 03-19-2000 04:09 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Liz, thank you

Sven, I'm not even going to respond to your devish ways!

Marina
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Oh come on Marina. . .

You know you want to. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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