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My Heart Hopes
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My Heart Hopes |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
My Hearts Hope I long to smell your cologne upon my pillow each night to know I no longer need dream now that your are here and with me I wish to gently touch your cheek my fingertips softly brushing your skin making your whole body tremble with desire for me I want to hear you say we are strongest as one and if we should part lost would be your soul from within I hope I can make you see my heart has room for only for one so tell me please it is all my heart hopes |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow, very sweet and tender poem, lots of emotion and desire expressed well, I have seen several poems like this today, I guess the poets are really full of passion in here (smile) take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wow, seems kindof romantic. James |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
The hallway from the wishing well to the waiting room seems to take for ever to travel  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet longings! Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful display of emotions, Marina. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks to all of you. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, *Sigh*. . . you really got me with this one. . . it's really very good. . . I can almost smell your perfume and feel your longing. . . Wonderful my *innocent* friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ohh... The emotions I feel with this one are all too familiar~ Your poem is simply beautiful~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, thank you...and I'm glad you know how innocent I really am! Marie,thank you for you kind words Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Janet Marie,forgot to ask so....??? Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-16-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, this is very lovely and wanting. A real deversion from your other works I must say. Parker |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina. . . Yes, I do. . . how could I not? ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James,thanks. Yes it is different for me....a whim I think.Nice of you to take the time to respond to my poem. In between Margarita's?? Well I'm sure you will be pleased to know our Canadian nights have been heating up since you've been gone! Sven,I just wondered because you know that I am very shy and sometimes have trouble expressing myself. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Um. . . excuse me Marina?? What did you say? ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Well Sven you know it is not easy for me to be so blunt and to the point when I am very shy. Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven I'm shocked...no smart comment?? Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina-- Who am I to disappoint? I think that one would need to only go to Adult to see how shy and not blunt you really are!!  ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ Lovely thoughts on display. Longing emotions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, I do believe you know me just a little too well! Marge, thank you for your compliments. Marina |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
marina, I love passionate poetry, so you know I loved this one! Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina. . . Do I really? ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Liz, thank you Sven, I'm not even going to respond to your devish ways! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Oh come on Marina. . . You know you want to. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I'm taking the 5th. Marina |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marina, very nice peom. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you Danny. Marina |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very alluring poem, Marina, and I enjoyed the sparring between you and Sven, too! Cor |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks Corinne, Hey you got to have a innocent fun too! Marina |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
Very well written. I am impressed. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Winrider,thank you very much. Marina |
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Mel~ Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16Gosford, New South Wales, Australia |
A lovely poem Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you Mel. Marina |
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