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Into the Blue

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 03-15-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

As the stars fall from the sky
Down upon the blue and silent world
I wipe the sleep from my eye,
I donít know the reason why,
All the memories are of that girl

Every sight and sound, taste and touch
Comes cascading through a thickening haze
Everything that ever meant so much
Every dream of senseless things and such
Forever seen through these nights and days

And if I ever dared to see
Those things which I try to hide
All I ever was and all I ever longed to be
Is now coming back to me
A part I thought had finally died

Into the blue I fall into
No rhyme nor reason
No change of season
Into the blue



[This message has been edited by JML (edited 03-15-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-15-2000 01:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Down upon the blue and silent world
I wipe the sleep from my eye,
I donít know the reason why,
All the memories are of that girl
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And if I ever dared to see
Those things which I try to hide
All I ever was and all I ever longed to be
Is now coming back to me
A part I thought had finally died

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jer, this is SO perfect...and so full of your sensitivity...the thing I love most about your poems...
she's a very lucky girl...
stalking you with pleasure, your jm
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-15-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I hate it when I get the blues...nice writing.  James
Martie
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3 posted 03-15-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I think if you look, you will find many colors in your own eyes....Sometimes the best poetry comes from those blue days.  Nicely done!
mariee66
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4 posted 03-15-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

This one just rolls smoothly~
Very nice work JML~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

serenity blaze
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5 posted 03-15-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

JML--this is a SONG--a nice blues tune at that...(serenity types while listening to
Sonny Boy Williamson...)  Once again, Nice work.  Thanks.
PoeticKnight
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6 posted 03-15-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

thank ya'll kindly...*L*
Denise
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7 posted 03-15-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful poem! Well done!

Denise
Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 03-15-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

JML,
This is Beautiful!!!! You did a remarkable job on this, very touching.  I loved it!! Thank you for sharing it  
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 03-16-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is very creative and also sad  
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