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Open Poetry #6

Wondering.....

NewbiePoetGuy
Junior Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 13
Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA

0 posted 2000-03-15 02:53 AM

Oh Lee, oh lee
Where art thee?
Have you left my life for good?

I wonder where you have gone
Or if you will come back like the morning dawn
Oh Lee, Oh Lee, Where have you gone?

All i know is that i love you
And i wish you would love me too
Oh Lee, Oh Lee, Where have you gone?

Please come back my dearest true
For I cannot live without you.

Enola
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 138
England

1 posted 2000-03-15 11:38 AM

My heart bleeds for you. This is lovely, I can't wait to read moe.

The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-03-15 09:52 PM

Hi NewbiePoetGuy,

This was very nice, I ejoyed it.
Welcome to passions

Cerenity

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-03-16 12:58 PM

Welcome to Passions...hope it all turns out OK.

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

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