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It's just not fair

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CrazyChick
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0 posted 03-15-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CrazyChick

          It's Just Not Fair
Its not fair
it wasn't her time yet
she was only 17
and had her whole life ahead of her

She was smart, inteligent and beautiful
and she was a friend to everyone

You couldn't help but smile
while in her presence
her eyes sparkled when she laughed

She always knew the right words to say
and she was always there to lend a helping hand to anyone in need

She was a true frind

but know she's gone and I don't know what to do
it still seems like a nightmare

I still expect to see her shopping at the mall
or eating at a resturant
I still expect to hear her voice
and see her smile

she will be greatly missed by all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


**in loving memory**     L.S
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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-15-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Life is not fair, but it is good.  We know not the day nor the hour.  Carpe Diem!
Nice tribute to your friend.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-15-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

your right...its not fair...we have to try to understand the reasons and not ask why, but its so hard when we lose someone we love...
very touching tribute to your friend,
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


CrazyChick
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3 posted 03-16-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you both very much Danny and Janet!!
Enola
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4 posted 03-16-2000 05:16 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

I completely agree, in curcumstances like this, life seems not just unfair, but really cruel.  Great tribute.  I hope everything goes okay for you.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Severn
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5 posted 03-16-2000 05:22 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

No that isn't fair - that is awful
Hugs



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Cuddlez
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6 posted 03-16-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Boy, I was saying that the other day. Its just not fair. Much condolences. You never quite get over the looking, sorry to say.

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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