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Hi (a haiku)
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Hi (a haiku) |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
Six months past, you died. Yet your phone machine says, "Hi". Voice still so alive. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
oh bboog, this is so sad, but so very well written. Take care, Melissa honeybee  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bboog, Wonderful, I enjoyed the read. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this......it only lasted about a week before the message was changed though. Sad poem. Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Nicely written. Indeed an acute subject. I lost a good friend this week (3-13-2000). Thanx for posting..... |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
To Melissa Honeybee,Seymour Tabin,dsnyder and INclan: Thanks for reading and commenting. This friend of a friend died about six months ago and his wife still hasn't changed their machine. To INclan: sorry to hear about your loss. warmest regards, bboog |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, this is very powerful. SO much packed into so few words. Well done |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dear bboog,i like this esp after i read your explanation....very simple pierce yet it tells so much of how this person is sorely missed sorry to hear about ur loss |
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