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WhtDove
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0 posted 03-15-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

The tranquil sounds of the ocean,
as they lap against the shore
Releasing the pent up storm
Of this raging, inner mind war

Stare at the gentle horizion
And colors of great design
Sky intertwines with ocean
The waters just sparkle and shine

To walk along sands of the beach
Footprints are leaving behind
Bad memories washed away
And soothing this subconscious mind

At last I've found comfort and peace
Along the colorful shore
Surrounded by all beauty
Serenity's peace evermore



 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
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Dark Angel
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1 posted 03-15-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel, this is ever so beautiful, tranquil, peaceful, Oh how I want to be there.
excellent work!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


wayoutwalt
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2 posted 03-15-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i just love beach poems sigh they are the best sigh watch out for the crabs and dont actually drink the water..nice poem tiz
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 03-15-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely...an excellent image...I love the flow of words you used.  
serenity blaze
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4 posted 03-15-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thank you, White Dove.  You truly live up to your name....
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 03-15-2000 04:34 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WhiteDove~
Thank you for this lovely walk along the beach ... I play in the sand and the surf of your imagination.
Serenity is mine.
Let's build sandcastles !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 03-15-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is beautiful, WhtDove... I love the idea of bad memories washed away with the tides. *S* Well done!  
WhtDove
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7 posted 03-15-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

DA, you are closer than I am!    I'll have to concentrate a little harder to get there   Thanks girl!

LOL Walt! No crabs allowed, and I wont' drink the water.  

Thank you Sharon! As I walk among the dead fish on the oceans shore   LOL (inside joke to those of you who think I've gone nuts)

Serenity thank you for such a wonderful compliment!

Marge glad you could play, how bout those sand castles? Let's build em  

Suthern I like that very idea too...now to find the ocean    Thanks sweets!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
Pepper
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8 posted 03-15-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is one of my favorite of your wonderful poems .....  
Gorgeous Dovey ......
Love ya,
Shannon
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9 posted 03-15-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

There's nothing like the sounds of the ocean and the feel of warm sand beneath your feet to bring peace and tranquility to the soul. It's wonderful to see you post, dovey!!!
Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 03-15-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I've been on a beach at the Ocean a couple times and can remember their beauty ...
I guess I'm kind of lucky because I'm surounded buy the Great Lakes where there are several beaches within an hours drive ... I love to walk on the beach at the waters' edge and feel the sand and water swirl around my feet ... finding shells and driftwood ... the sounds ... the air ...
... can't wait ...
thankyou WhtDove for the breath of summer
I also like to stop for fries with lots of salt and vinegar

Rex}<{{{{o>
Denise
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11 posted 03-15-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Rebecca, this is so beautiful!! I am going tomorrow for the day and as I said I will be thinking of you! Wish you could be there with us!  

Denise
WhtDove
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12 posted 03-15-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you sweet Pepper! That's awfully nice of you  

Wish I had an ocean nearby Balladeer. Wish I could post more often. Thank you!

Rex, lucky you are. And send some of those fries too! YUM! Though never had vinegar on them...hmmn...thanks!


Denise, seeing as how we both have been uninspired lately, this came about after talking with you, knowing you were going to the ocean. My thoughts will be there with you, and I hope you have an Awesome time!
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 03-15-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

"Bad memories washed away..."  This is breathtaking, and I wish I could say something more original, as you've received some wonderful reviews on this!  I just love the ocean because it is so tranquil...takes you away from it all, in a way...somehow.  Thanks for sharing...pFF
hoot_owl_rn
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I love the peacefullness in this one  
PhaerieChild
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15 posted 03-15-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Rebecca, thanks for the walk on the beach. It was refreshing and wonderful to feel the salted breeze after the storm and watch bad memories just wash away.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


WhtDove
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Gen so true, it does seem to take you away from it all. Just where I need to be about right now    Thank you

Ruth glad you enjoyed it.

Shawna, I'm so glad to see you   Your most welcome my friend! Thank you  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
Nan
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17 posted 03-16-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

"Serenity's peace evermore"...indeed
Very nice, WhtDove..
WhtDove
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18 posted 03-16-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Nan!
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