How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 A Simile of Love
 1 2 3 4 5
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

A Simile of Love

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Ravenlearns2fly
Member
since 02-28-2000
[First Post] 71


0 posted 03-15-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly


A Simile of  Love

I ventured out one morning so as to walk along the shore
To be alone & collect my thoughts
I escaped out my front door

But as luck would have it , the sun than disappeared
The wind began to howl
Just as I  had feared

The clouds began to gather, the sky became than dark
This day was remnant of  my life
A simile of  my broken heart

For my love affair ,  had started of  like sunshine
Warm  & enticing was your embrace
Moments filled with laughter
Existing  now only in my memory , in the shadows I still chase

As the wind blew strong, direction of our love than changed
With out any warning , quietly you slipped away
Leaving me alone in darkness
In silence you then went astray

The clouds release my tears , the rain
I begin my journey home I allow the memories to than fade
still I ask the question though
why?

Does it always rain on my parade?


In every life a little rain must fall

Raven Legros
(c)03 13 2000



 
© Copyright 2000 Ravenlearns2fly - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


1 posted 03-15-2000 05:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Raven~
Hello, little one.  So pleased that the spirits have led you to this place.
It is serene with many friends who are caring and loving.

Your poem is enchanting, soft and yet powerful with emotion.
I'll share my umbrella with you.
    
I AM SOOOOOOO GLAD YOU CAME HERE, my friend.
I send spirits of love and friendship
to guide you.
Love to you ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 03-15-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah..but would we ever appreciate the sun as much if we didn't have the rain?  
Welcome to passions  
Ravenlearns2fly
Member
since 02-28-2000
Posts 71


3 posted 03-15-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Marge

Thank You! so much for your warm welcome. I am still learning to find my way around, it is nice to have a warm spirit such as you to help guide me.

Little one
Raven

Hoot-owl

Thank You for your reply and comments. True it is that the rain reminds me of the beauty of sun. In truth I prefere the rain It acts like a clensing for me washing away the problem. so that I am able to look forward to new days of sunlight.

Raven Legros
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 07-17-99
Posts 8273


4 posted 03-16-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What a wonderful poem Raven, and you are very welcome here...

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Ravenlearns2fly
Member
since 02-28-2000
Posts 71


5 posted 03-16-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Severn
Thank You! I am glad you liked the poem and thank for the welcome mat.
Raven
Ravenlearns2fly will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> A Simile of Love Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors