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A Simile of Love
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A Simile of Love |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
A Simile of Love I ventured out one morning so as to walk along the shore To be alone & collect my thoughts I escaped out my front door But as luck would have it , the sun than disappeared The wind began to howl Just as I had feared The clouds began to gather, the sky became than dark This day was remnant of my life A simile of my broken heart For my love affair , had started of like sunshine Warm & enticing was your embrace Moments filled with laughter Existing now only in my memory , in the shadows I still chase As the wind blew strong, direction of our love than changed With out any warning , quietly you slipped away Leaving me alone in darkness In silence you then went astray The clouds release my tears , the rain I begin my journey home I allow the memories to than fade still I ask the question though why? Does it always rain on my parade? In every life a little rain must fall Raven Legros (c)03 13 2000 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raven~ Hello, little one. So pleased that the spirits have led you to this place. It is serene with many friends who are caring and loving. Your poem is enchanting, soft and yet powerful with emotion. I'll share my umbrella with you.   I AM SOOOOOOO GLAD YOU CAME HERE, my friend. I send spirits of love and friendship to guide you. Love to you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah..but would we ever appreciate the sun as much if we didn't have the rain? Welcome to passions |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Marge Thank You! so much for your warm welcome. I am still learning to find my way around, it is nice to have a warm spirit such as you to help guide me. Little one Raven Hoot-owl Thank You for your reply and comments. True it is that the rain reminds me of the beauty of sun. In truth I prefere the rain It acts like a clensing for me washing away the problem. so that I am able to look forward to new days of sunlight. Raven Legros |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What a wonderful poem Raven, and you are very welcome here... K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Severn Thank You! I am glad you liked the poem and thank for the welcome mat. Raven |
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