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Sea Breeze

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Zelda
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since 02-01-2000
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NOVA


25 posted 03-17-2000 01:00 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

I was just in FL in November... I'm dying to go back.  
Your poem was very beautiful.
Z
Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
Posts 9405
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26 posted 03-17-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rainbow, so nice to see you, when you are not present, you spirit leaves a void.
HUSG

bboog, I appreciate suggestions to my poetry, but if I add another "many" it would interrupt the flow and rhythm of this verse. I hope I did not offend you with my opinion poem, but I strongly feel that no one could improve on Marti's poetry. Hope you understand.
Your friend in poetry,
Liz

Balladeer, It was I who was honored to meet all the poet friends of Florida. Thank you for your gracious hospitality

Femme, Thanks for your wonderful comments, I appreciate your love for the sea

Whtdve, It was an event to be envied, Thanks

Serenity, Thanks for the "perfect"

HM3, Galveston, an island retreat, home of the most wonderful shop of old maps and books. But I don't recall any palms on the beach. Have fun and thank you

Severn, Thanks for the tearful response. We spoke of you often

James, you give the loveliest responses, Thanks

Zelda, Thank you for your kind remarks

Liz
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


27 posted 03-17-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Liz,

Guess I am last to respond to this LOL...Oh well I liked it so much, I'm sending it back to the top again! This was such a beautiful poem. I felt like I was at this location and time that you describe. I live on the coast of NC and am love with the ocean too! This poem was written with sensitivity and emotion. Thanks so much for sharing with all of us. Was a pleasure to read.

Take care,
AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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Pennsylvania


28 posted 03-17-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Amy, Thank you for your wonderful response. It must be nice to live in beautiful North Carolina by the sea.
Glad you liked the poem
Liz
 
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