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Silent Desire

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-14-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Silent Desire

         Feel
feathered strokes
  upon your
     flesh
        with
luminous
   kisses
    from the
     crescent moon,
hungrily devouring
   smooth as satin
you.

My eyes hunger
the beauty
  and iridescent glow
before me.

    butterfly
sensations
on this dreamlike
       night, captures
anxious, passionate
breathless…breath

and

silent desire
  battles lustful
           apetite…..
only to surrender.


Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-14-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
LittleBoyLost
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1 posted 03-14-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for LittleBoyLost   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleBoyLost

Wow!  I wish I was him!    Very hot!
WhtDove
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2 posted 03-14-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Free verse master ya are Angel!  heheh
Well done, looks like you have an admirer! hahah LOL
Poet deVine
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3 posted 03-14-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful words, images and form...incredible job...Now as I said, spice it up and come over to the Adult Forum!!!  
Sven
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4 posted 03-14-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

DA, I always marvel at the care and time that you take to make your poems look as good as they sound. . . truely you take time with your craft. . .

Reminds me of cummings. . . my personal favorite. . . the words are excellent and the form is wonderful. . .

And like DeVine said. . . spice it up and come over to Adult. . . we have a place already reserved for you!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Denise
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5 posted 03-14-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Dark Angel!

Denise
jazzgal
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6 posted 03-14-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for jazzgal   Email jazzgal   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jazzgal

My last poem for the night... put a smile in my face, because it reminded me of cummings (fave poet), with your style and grace!
Severn
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7 posted 03-16-2000 05:18 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Soul Sis - this is SUPERB!!!

OK?

NO arguing!!

I am so proud of you - honestly hon...this has a magical quality to it.

    butterfly
sensations
on this dreamlike
       night, captures
anxious, passionate
breathless…breath


yep - gorgeous.


JamesMichael
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Dark Angel this is very nice and desirable..James
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 03-16-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This poem graces the page
with silken desire.
Positively scrumptious.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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10 posted 03-16-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Littlelostboy, WOW I wish I was him too   thank you for sweet reply.
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Free Verse master I don't think so Angel, but your such a sweetie for saying so .  
thank you for your lovely compliment.
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Sharon thank you for your lovey reply, I can't spice this one up,it's meant tot stay this way, but I'll certainly try another for you  
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Sven thank you so very much for your lovely reply. Like I said to Sharon, I'll certainly try  
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Thank you so much Denise.  
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Jazzgirl, I'm glad that my poem was able to put a smile on your face .   thank you
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Soul-Sis, I don't know what to say.. ummm Idon't know if it is Superb, but I won't argue with you, just want to say thanks for "showing me the ropes" with freeverse, I am really enjoying this style.
I am glad you loved it honey.   thank you.
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jmlee12345, thank you, glad you liked it  
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Marge scrumptiouos hey? well I'm glad you enjoyed.   Thank you for your lovely reply.




 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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