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my monster

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adam
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          "MY MONSTER"

HE TALKS TO ME WHEN I CANT SLEEP.
THE ERIE SOUND OF CONSTANT
CREEP.
QUIETLY STALKING WHILE I
PRAY.
FEEDING ON THE INNOCENT WORDS I
SAY.
HES HIDING NOW SO YOU WONT
SEE.
FAR AWAY INSIDE OF ME.
I NEVER KNOW WHEN HE MIGHT APPEAR.
THE EVIL PRESENCE CALLED MY
FEAR.



 
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very interesting, if not cryptic poem, but very well written
Danny Holloway
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I believe that monster is in all of us to some degree.  
Nicely worded.
 
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