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NewbiePoetGuy
Junior Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 13
Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA

0 posted 2000-03-14 06:37 PM

My Angel

When I look at the world it all seems so pointless.
For you were the one who brought meaning to my life.
My one and only dream is to love you, comfort and protect you, and make you my wife.

I have never felt this way way before.
And with every day my love for you grows more and more.
Without you I cannot be.
For you have completed me.

You are the perfect woman for me.
God, how i miss you my angel AuraLee.
Though most of the time I can hide the pain.
There are those times when the way I look and the way I feel are exactly the same.

You are the one who I love so much.
Even though we have never seen or touched.
I will always remain true to you.
But I cannot ask you to do the same.
For your love is fleeting, but mine will always remain.

When I see two people locked in a lover's embrace.
I look, through my mind's eye, and see your face.
My love will overcome all space and time.
Even though you are not mine.

When I think of us being seperated, sadness fills my heart.
But when I finally hear your again, this sadness will depart.
Please come back to my arms and my life.
So I may try, at long last to make you my wife.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-03-14 06:41 PM

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. I look forward to reading more from you.

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

2 posted 2000-03-14 06:43 PM

Wow~
I think we have that same longing Newbie~
Your poem was very nicely written~
Welcome!
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-03-14 06:43 PM

~newbie or not...this was sensational! what a lucky lady she is! she needs to wake up and realize what she has in front of her. welcome to passions. beautiful poem!!

AMY

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-03-15 09:30 AM

How very romantic...welcome to passions

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-03-16 02:35 AM

A warm welcome to passions
this is a beautiful piece, kept me wanting more. Thanks for posting

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2000-03-16 02:39 AM

There's heart and soul in this one...welcome from me as well!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-03-16 06:11 AM

An excellent expression of the feelings from your heart...a pleasure to read. James

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2000-03-16 10:44 AM

Newbie~ this is very romantic, great entrance! Welcome!-SEA

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2000-03-17 09:43 PM

Very romantic and touching. She must be special. Can't wait for more.

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