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My One True Love

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NewbiePoetGuy
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0 posted 03-14-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for NewbiePoetGuy   Email NewbiePoetGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NewbiePoetGuy's Home Page   View IP for NewbiePoetGuy

My Angel

When I look at the world it all seems so pointless.
For you were the one who brought meaning to my life.
My one and only dream is to love you, comfort and protect you, and make you my wife.

I have never felt this way way before.
And with every day my love for you grows more and more.
Without you I cannot be.
For you have completed me.

You are the perfect woman for me.
God, how i miss you my angel AuraLee.
Though most of the time I can hide the pain.
There are those times when the way I look and the way I feel are exactly the same.

You are the one who I love so much.
Even though we have never seen or touched.
I will always remain true to you.
But I cannot ask you to do the same.
For your love is fleeting, but mine will always remain.

When I see two people locked in a lover's embrace.
I look, through my mind's eye, and see your face.
My love will overcome all space and time.
Even though you are not mine.

When I think of us being seperated, sadness fills my heart.
But when I finally hear your again, this sadness will depart.
Please come back to my arms and my life.
So I may try, at long last to make you my wife.

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1 posted 03-14-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. I look forward to reading more from you.
mariee66
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2 posted 03-14-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Wow~
I think we have that same longing Newbie~
Your poem was very nicely written~
Welcome!
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Aimster
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3 posted 03-14-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~newbie or not...this was sensational! what a lucky lady she is! she needs to wake up and realize what she has in front of her. welcome to passions. beautiful poem!!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
hoot_owl_rn
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How very romantic...welcome to passions  
tracie66
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5 posted 03-16-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A warm welcome to passions
this is a beautiful piece, kept me wanting more. Thanks for posting  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
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6 posted 03-16-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

There's heart and soul in this one...welcome from me as well!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 03-16-2000 06:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

An excellent expression of the feelings from your heart...a pleasure to read.  James
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Newbie~ this is very romantic, great entrance! Welcome!-SEA
Lone Wolf
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9 posted 03-17-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Very romantic and touching.  She must be special.  Can't wait for more.
 
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