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Psychology Too |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Adrenaline and endorphines The physiology of love Could roughly be wrought bungee jumping or eating chocolate But what muse fired by Rubber bands and Chips Ahoy? There must be something more Something more jumped me from a coffin cold Elvis dead gracelanded in state embalmbed in a Jack Danieled Pity Party Something more Mused me into lexarkana Waxed me to breathe in Oh-2 Mini skirted muses cum Going on and on of Endless passion Flirting fawning femininity Flocks to sinuous shoulders and Deep eyed tousled hair Barbie Dolled smiles and Pretty perfume But something more Moved me from a stranded Beach wailed Something more required Than brain chemistry But Merely You Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
sigh...funny how that one special person puts every one else in a different perspective, even ourselves...great writing....loved this |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Why must you always grab my attention, so?!  "But what muse fired by Rubber bands and Chips Ahoy?" Fantastic lines...although, you'd be surprised at the seductive draw of a well made chocolate chip cookie.  Always a fan, just now speaking up. Keep writing! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Wow! Thanks Satiate... and Corazon don't be so silent!! thankyou  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I liked this poem alot--especially the last line--seemed to answer the something more question. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thank you Martie! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This made me laugh a little but made me ponder seriously too, L.R. )not always an easy task)...LOL The ending simply sweeps you away. Wonderful job. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This really says a great deal more than what is on the surface, well done |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Now that's a real compliment Hottie... thanks... I always write in layers so the real message is encrypted to the one with the decoder ring... lol but try to make it broad enough for anyone to read... thanks again... And Micheal -- thanks also -- yours is a very astute read I think -- I've always thought a touch of humor the best way to communicate the most serious of subjects... |
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