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You can Ron but You Can't Hide (Watch out Wiz,we're comin' t'git'cha
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You can Ron but You Can't Hide (Watch out Wiz,we're comin' t'git'cha |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
No Wizard Villanelle I fear One known seems to have dis-apppeared To start this search I volunteer No hocus-pocus it's been made clear Who's not afraid come lend an ear No Wizard Villanelle I fear For such we'll look both far and near If need be out beyond the spheres To start this search I volunteer Come forth we summon thee , appear Gather 'round be of good cheer No Wizard Villanelle I fear No power held or secret dear Will sway this course bound to adhere To start this search I volunteer Come poets from both hemispheres Join this quest of nineteen tiers To start this search I volunteer No Wizard Villanelle I fear [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Doc: A few variations on the "b" rhymes but a very tight (and amusing) villanelle. Good work. Jim |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
great poem im curious is this about our olf friend wiz thast use to post here? |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Good job on this, Dr Moose!  Denise |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Dear Doc am I glad to see you I’ve been scared here all alone Instead of red I do feel blue The King with his head on a stone I’ve been here scared all alone In this reddish world colourful The King with his head on a stone To see this is rather scareful In this reddish world colourful You dare to challenge the Wizard To hear this is rather scareful Maybe we should ask Scotland Yard You dare to challenge the Wizard What evil will come upon us Maybe we should ask Scotland Yard They may send us Mister E. Fudd What evil will come upon us With you around things will work out They may send us Mister E. Fudd Which would change this story no doubt With you around things will work out Instead of red I do feel blue Which would change this story no doubt Dear Doc am I glad to see you Lady in Red Juliet Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Nah just_another_fe, thiz iz wha' we call a "Stute poem he he he Hiya Doc ! I'ma here ! Need a hand ? Will be right with ya, the Lady needs a blanket first. Did ya see ? She looks all blue ! |
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LittleBoyLost Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 28 |
A villanelle! Those are tough to write. I loved this. LBL |
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ONE FLEW OVER Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55Cuckoos Nest |
I'm here to help the King is fine he's drawing art with the Nursie. What can I do to help you Doc, where is this Wizard Villanelle? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I found the wizz just the other day And his name he has given way He became ruffryder for awhile But got the boot for his style But never fear he's not too far away But alas, not for long will he stay For he'll be up to his old tricks And will most definetly get the flick If I come across old wizz, I'll surely give a wink But finding that rascally fellow will really make us think. Mmmmm flush him out.....  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Doc Moose, this is a great Villanelle.... I sure hope you find our wizard - He's been behind that curtain for a long thyme now.. This is what he looks like, in case you get a glimpse...  For the official Passions record - the wizard of the stute is an original Passions forefather. He is not to be confused with the more recent "Wizzard" who no longer posts at this site.. [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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Wizard Villanelle New Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 9Alice of Oz |
Wizard Villanelle you should fear ! Your Wiz is no danger to me I shall not let you interfere Your Wizard has disappeared Where is he ? I do ask you ! Wizard Villanelle you should fear ! Behind curtains ! He won’t appear ! Can’t you see, his magic’s left him I shall not let you interfere The Silly-bus is very near I am still Master of the streets Wizard Villanelle you should fear My spell has blinded you severe Scavenge the schoolyard all you want I shall not let you interfere My Silly-bus, syllable dear Too blind to see they are my dear I shall not let you interfere Wizard Villanelle you should fear ! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
First , thanks to all for the read & reply ,and now ... Jim , on the form , I'm not sure what you meant by "variations " on the "b"lines ? jaf, Nope , wrong Wiz , please see what Nan has said below . d,as always it's good to hear from you . M'lady , I do not recognize this form , but am certainly flattered that you took the time to write it in response Justin N. , hey guy ! Thanks for the offer ! LBL , Like with anything else , the form can be difficult to work around , but they do get easier , (unfortunately , they don't always get better ) One Flew , Thanks for the offer , I thought perhaps more would reply in kind |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
tracie 66 , I think we have two different Wiz's here , please check Nan's official record . Nan , Thank you for clearing up some of this mystery , as always , I see you are right on top of things .As soon as I have a little time to prepare I will respond to the Wiz, who I see has shown up while we were chatting, Doc |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Dear Doctor Moose, it was my pleasure to reply to your wonderful Villanelle with a Pantoum. Lady in Red Juliet Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I've come to help if you will accept the kind services of this here Nurse I think the Library to have answers that may help within this journey. |
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Justin Kace Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 82Oz |
Justin Kace you think you'll find Our wondrous wizard easily Let me tell you all one thing He'll have protection here from me To shelter him I'll do my best This kindly man just needs some rest |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I see your pantoum you're raising the stakes First stop Khartoum in this search that we make One should have a full deck this to undertake Playing close to the vest no sweat shall we break Understood are the rules that the house gets it's take I see your pantoum you are raising the stakes Beginning descent buffet and shake A Silly-bus waits on the ground by a lake One should have a full deck this to undertake A thirst for adventure discovery may slake Though the clues leading here all turned out to be fake I see your pantoum you are raising the stakes Airborne once more off tarmac sun baked Full boat one two three kings over jakes One should have a full deck this to undertake We're comin' there Wiz make no mistake From the 'stute we did stage a major outbreak I see your pantoum you're raising the stakes One should have a full deck this to undertake |
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E.Fudd Junior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 38Dolgeville, N.Y.U.S. |
Oh bwother Doc , you've wealwy wost it this thyme ! Do you think you're some secwet agent or something ? This is wedicuwous , oh , and as for a full deck , that definatwy weaves you out , even I know a pantoum beats a full house ! Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
You stay out of this Fudd , you obviously didn't notice that my "real " hand was five threes with a four in the hole kicker . So deal yourself out before I have " Ante Em ' take care of my light work ! |
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Jeannie Junior Member
since 2000-03-17
Posts 40Wherever I'm needed |
Master I'm here to help what can I do? I can blink us all to within the silly bus, would you like that Master, would you? Lady in Red now that I'm here to help you'll be saying your vows to the King what was that, I heard a very loud yelp?  |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Been holding my breath for much too long And now I hear a Yellow Brick song Is that Elton or Nurse C Who is it that's kissing me I believe things have really gone wrong This ain't the 'Stute, nor is it Kansas Hope this ain't the Godfather's last kiss Is that Doc Moose that I hear Please tell me Red is now near It's time to end this paralysis Oh my! This place really is bizarre Nurse C! Enough with the C P R Dear Red its good to see you Tell me, what now shall we do Hey Moose, by chance did you bring your car This yellow path has no speed limit I'm sure we could go real fast on it Let us go search for the bus The one that Wiz hid from us Everyone pile in! Time to split |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
Thyme to split? My thoughts exact. So I did, and that's a fact. I will fill you in real soon. Is tonight a half full moon? Jusin Kace please watch your backs. Until then, I'm in the stacks. signed, Justin Thyme, 'Stute escapee. aka Leonardo DaVinci former Artiste Extraordinaire current Library Aide |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France Our search cut short by ocean's swell fear Neptune's great puissance Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance Washed ashore as we explore the beach's great expanse A bottle lies before one eye ( the other looks askance) As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France Curious I pop the cork and with much extravagance A Jinn appears with two cold beers and does the Hula dance Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance She says since I have set her free our search can now advance With wave of hand a sea-plane lands and out steps "Tuckett's" Nance As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France "The Silly-bus you'll not find here give Kansas one more glance" By plane then train (this is insane ) we'll have to re-finance Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance Another stop along the way by those who are entranced You can Ron but you can't hide from our vigilance As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance |
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Jeannie Junior Member
since 2000-03-17
Posts 40Wherever I'm needed |
The silly bus will be my focus as I nod my head to transport our squad. The silly bus to find will be a plus for all of us so here we go ready or not away we blow. Oh my stars where's Lady in Red, Andrew, and Nurse Crachet? (I hear a voice) Vegas Caesar's palace oh my, I did not mean for any malice. Shall we stay here in Kansas where the air is clear or should we search for where the other's may be? So sorry master for messing up must have lost my concentration part way through, sometimes I create such awful disaster. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Just a blink makes one plan toast,hopes the others all are fine Red eye taken from east coast, now arriving right on time According to that last signpost ,points this way to the "Grand Design" The Silly-bus which matters most , with us does intertwine Yellow roads where road-kill roasts , that which stupefies the mind Just a blink makes one plan toast , hope the others all are fine Nothing here but other's ghosts , I'll take the Vegas line Odds foremost we'll find our host , so says this hunch of mine According to that last signpost , this way to the "Grand Design" Excess to the uttermost ,glitz and glamour strike some blind With our mission we're engrossed ,"Neuf Le Moose" Seven of Nine! Just a blink makes one plan toast , hopes the others all are fine Re-financed by a slick riposte , the Jinn and I shall dine On bouilliabaise from the sea-coast, with fine imported wine According to the last signpost , this way to the "Grand Design" Not to post what's innermost , if we were so inclined Would be negligence most gross , to be poetically unkind According to that last signpost , this way to the "Grand Design" Just a blink makes one plan toast , hopes the others all are fine [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Oh my goodness, what have you done Andrew are you ok my hun ? Jeannie must be somewhat rusty At least a tiny bit dusty Crachet glad to see you here too Look a man with a ‘Stute tattoo ! Could that be our Doctor Moose Chumming up with that dumb blond goose Nah, dilusional I must be That’s not our Doc Moose, now I see Bets can be made with Crayons Red Only one, but also hundred Are you hungry my dear Andrew ? See they serve here a gooey stew Maybe a game you rather play Russian roulette is what you say ? Would you mind it awfully dear If I’d walk ‘round with Crachet here While you wait here at the bar If the others arrive by car Nurse Crachet we will walk around Until the others we have found No there’s no time for a glass of ale Oh my goodness, there are Chip & Dales ! Lady in Red Juliet Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Juliet for goodness sake what kind of observers could we even make if your looking out and only seeing chipmunks. These men you ponder over in that circus tent cast gifts of wonder and they're called Chippendale's. Do you care to glance while we're right here we'll blame it all on Jeannie's blinking circumstance. Look at that one's chest and look at him (wow)! He's hardly dressed how did these men get so blessed. Juliet this is to much for me never again a match to be for these men have more then I've seen before let's find the door. Let's get back to Andrew and check if he's found the rest of the crew or maybe he's still eating the stew. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
I want to play this looks like fun please say I may What do I have to say What has to be done? I want to play! Should I wrestle a sun ray ? Or get out my gun?? Please say I may ! Hey!! Wait!! It's okay Please don't run I want to play!!! There's no need to pray It was a joke, hun Please say I may? Please say not nay It was a fake gun!!! I want to play!!!! Please say I may ?!?! **Sorry my first attempt at villanelle had to get a book to see how it was done LOL but I think I like it and will have to try it on a more serious note soon "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Jeannie ! Now ya really did it ! One of these days I’ll get a fit Can’t ya get it right at once It could ‘ave bin yar only change How did we get into this mess Andrew gone with Lady in Red ! Crachet there too ? That they will like ! She won’t be moving from Red’s side Doc we must get to Las Vegas Something called the Palace Ceasar Whatta ya say ? A bit of roulette ? Or throwing dice in the toilet ? I always liked to play the cards I really think it is an art To let ‘em think they got it all Then steal the nikkels, take ‘em all Jeannie, got some magic left ? To cover up a master theft ? Or got a car hidden somewhere ? We really should be gettin’ there OK Doc, let’s hit the road Or would ya rather go by goat ? |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Sure,come right in and play along I heard ya like playin' ping pong It's kinda nutty over here But you never hav' to fear I'd protect ya with me life Do anything to keep ya alive ! Justin Nuendo  |
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Jeannie Junior Member
since 2000-03-17
Posts 40Wherever I'm needed |
Justin I'll be glad to help us get out of this horrible ruckus I'm looking forward to my wine so we need to get here in line to Vegas we go for a mission I promise a safe transmission. One, two, three Vegas to dine Wow, Master look all this wine Justin Nuendo, ONE FLEW now where could they be off to? What's that sign by the guard's? Redwood Valley Vineyards where in the world are we now? I think I'm gonna have a cow! So sorry Master I've failed again sometimes I think I've fried my brain. I understand if you want to return me seems my magic is just a bit to rusty. |
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ONE FLEW OVER Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55Cuckoos Nest |
Hey, Justin man what's going on I feel like I was hit hard with baton? Where is Dr. Moose and Jeannie they're probably off having a martini? What Justin she likes her fine wine well, than maybe they went to dine? Let's look around see where we are hey, look over there it say's free car we could help Doc out let's go get it. So your giving this car away today why would you give this with no pay? Justin stop pulling on my tee shirt your making my shoulders really hurt! What do you mean it's surly not you? Oh no, I'm having a terrible nightmare I see Nurse Crachet pulling my hair! You mean we're in Vegas we made it! Boy, the Doc will be so very happy he can trade the genie for a mappy. |
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Tinkerbell New Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 4 |
What do you mean Chippendales? I'm surrounded by hay bales But I think I saw Elmer Fudd Hunting that poor Tweety Bird I'll check into it Justin Kace And meet you all at Carsar's placs! ~~~ Justin Thyme I see the fabled vineyard sign I really hate to Justin Trude But I think I hear that Tarzan dude Besides we need to get on the go... I promised I'd meet Justin Nuendo! ~~~ oh no!! what a mess was created Jennie thinks she's Justin Ebriated She's wearing a big Chesire Grin Oh my... the trouble we are in !! I promise we'll all be ther soon But under Doc's advice sleeping til noon ~~~ I'm so sorry Lady in Red We're coming soon, we're Justin Bed Honestly I have no idea where the wine went I swear... I'm Justin O'Cent!!!!!!! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
ONE FLEW OVER I am no nightmare when will you realize that I do care and I was not pulling on your hair that cross necklace you wear got tangled in this snare so can you think fair? Justin Nuendo where is Dr. Moose is he attempting to be a recluse and remain away on the loose or is he cooking a goose before seeing a noose in the red caboose? |
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Sylvester Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 16 |
Shufferin' Shuckotash... Everybody get back in da STUTE right now.... I hear da wizard might be there...  |
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Wizard Villanelle New Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 9Alice of Oz |
No-one can find us here We’re having a good time Drinking wine and cold beer They do nothing but steer Cross every country road No-one can find us here My silly-bus, my dear You’re safe here by my side Drinking wine and cold beer This is a new career Performing in Vegas No-one can find us here I am no rocketeer ! Playing my act on stage Drinking wine and a cold beer I wish for a cigar And Jeannie in a jar Drinking wine and a cold beer No-one can find us here ! [This message has been edited by Wizard Villanelle (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Round and round Place your bet Time to answer the call I'm spellbound Drawn to it I love that silver ball Ten on Red Five on Black Twenty across the board Go ahead Bet the stack I've come to make a hoard See that ball Watch it fall I love double ought green Wager all for a haul I'll even bet Doc's spleen ----- Hmmmm.... How did I end up here is Vegas? I vaguely remember something about Kansas, holding my breath and being kissed by Lord Elton. But hey! I'm in Vegas! Where'd I get all these chips from? And this Spleen? Say... Wheel-boy... can you ask one of the pit bosses how much I can get for a spleen? Thanks. Now let us see... let's go heavy on Red... and Thirtysix... Twentyfour... Thirtyfour... Seem like winners to me... and always go to the green. Alright... rollem! |
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Miss Behavin' Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 84 |
Did somebody say CHIPPENDALE??   [This message has been edited by Miss Behavin' (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Why Miss Behavin', I'd say you was a winner with that hand! Way to deal it out! Very Vegas. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I'm afraid we may have lost focus on the subject at hand ...Hello !!! Where is the Wiz? Try Master and Jeannie on the way to Vegas,at least you'll get a good ride. Doc |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
For those who haven't had enough just to bring you up to snuff . Doc |
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Justine Uff Junior Member
since 1999-10-17
Posts 27 |
You think they've all had Justine Uff But that is just not so We're off to Vegas to play craps With Chip'n'Dale you know.... |
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