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You can Ron but You Can't Hide (Watch out Wiz,we're comin' t'git'cha

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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 03-14-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

No Wizard Villanelle I fear
One known seems to have dis-apppeared
To start this search I volunteer

No hocus-pocus it's been made clear
Who's not afraid come lend an ear
No Wizard Villanelle I fear

For such we'll look both far and near
If need be out beyond the spheres
To start this search I volunteer

Come forth we summon thee , appear
Gather 'round be of good cheer
No Wizard Villanelle I fear

No power held or secret dear
Will sway this course bound to adhere
To start this search I volunteer

Come poets from both hemispheres
Join this quest of nineteen tiers
To start this search I volunteer
No Wizard Villanelle I fear



[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-15-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
jbouder
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1 posted 03-14-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for jbouder   Email jbouder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jbouder

Doc:

A few variations on the "b" rhymes but a very tight (and amusing) villanelle.  Good work.

Jim
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2 posted 03-14-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

great poem im curious is this about our olf friend wiz thast use to post here?
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3 posted 03-14-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Good job on this, Dr Moose!  

Denise
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4 posted 03-14-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Dear Doc am I glad to see you
Iíve been scared here all alone
Instead of red I do feel blue
The King with his head on a stone

Iíve been here scared all alone
In this reddish world colourful
The King with his head on a stone
To see this is rather scareful

In this reddish world colourful
You dare to challenge the Wizard
To hear this is rather scareful
Maybe we should ask Scotland Yard

You dare to challenge the Wizard
What evil will come upon us
Maybe we should ask Scotland Yard
They may send us Mister E. Fudd

What evil will come upon us
With you around things will work out
They may send us Mister E. Fudd
Which would change this story no doubt

With you around things will work out
Instead of red I do feel blue
Which would change this story no doubt
Dear Doc am I glad to see you

Lady in Red

  Juliet

 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

Justin Nuendo
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5 posted 03-14-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

Nah just_another_fe, thiz iz wha' we call a "Stute poem he he he

Hiya Doc ! I'ma here ! Need a hand ? Will be right with ya, the Lady needs a blanket first. Did ya see ? She looks all blue !
LittleBoyLost
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6 posted 03-14-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for LittleBoyLost   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleBoyLost

A villanelle!  Those are tough to write.  I loved this.

LBL
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7 posted 03-14-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for ONE FLEW OVER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ONE FLEW OVER

I'm here to help
the King is fine
he's drawing art
with the Nursie.
What can I do
to help you Doc,
where is this
Wizard Villanelle?
tracie66
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8 posted 03-15-2000 05:18 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

I found the wizz just the other day
And his name he has given way

He became ruffryder for awhile
But got the boot for his style

But never fear he's not too far away
But alas, not for long will he stay

For he'll be up to his old tricks
And will most definetly get the flick

If I come across old wizz, I'll surely give a wink
But finding that rascally fellow will really make us think.

Mmmmm  flush him out.....
Nan
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9 posted 03-15-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Doc Moose, this is a great Villanelle.... I sure hope you find our wizard - He's been behind that curtain for a long thyme now..

This is what he looks like, in case you get a glimpse...



For the official Passions record - the wizard of the stute is an original Passions forefather.  He is not to be confused with the more recent "Wizzard" who no longer posts at this site..





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-15-2000).]
Wizard Villanelle
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10 posted 03-15-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for Wizard Villanelle   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Wizard Villanelle

Wizard Villanelle you should fear !
Your Wiz is no danger to me
I shall not let you interfere

Your Wizard has disappeared
Where is he ? I do ask you !
Wizard Villanelle you should fear !

Behind curtains ! He wonít appear !
Canít you see, his magicís left him
I shall not let you interfere

The Silly-bus is very near
I am still Master of the streets
Wizard Villanelle you should fear

My spell has blinded you severe
Scavenge the schoolyard all you want
I shall not let you interfere

My Silly-bus, syllable dear
Too blind to see they are my dear
I shall not let you interfere
Wizard Villanelle you should fear !

Dr.Moose1
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11 posted 03-15-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

First , thanks to all for the read & reply ,and now ...
Jim , on the form , I'm not sure what you meant by "variations " on the "b"lines ?

jaf, Nope , wrong Wiz , please see what Nan has said below .

d,as always it's good to hear from you .

M'lady , I do not recognize this form , but am certainly flattered that you took the time to write it in response

Justin N. ,  hey guy ! Thanks for the offer !

LBL , Like with anything else , the form can be difficult to work around , but they do get easier , (unfortunately , they don't always get better )

One Flew , Thanks for the offer , I thought perhaps more would reply in kind
Dr.Moose1
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12 posted 03-15-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

tracie 66 , I think we have two different Wiz's here , please check Nan's official record .
Nan , Thank you for clearing up some of this mystery , as always , I see you are right on top of things .As soon as I have a little time to prepare I will respond to the Wiz,
who I see has shown up while we were chatting,
Doc
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13 posted 03-15-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Dear Doctor Moose, it was my pleasure to reply to your wonderful Villanelle with a Pantoum.

Lady in Red
  Juliet

 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

Nurse Crachet
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14 posted 03-15-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I've come to help if you will accept
the kind services of this here Nurse
I think the Library to have answers
that may help within this journey.
Justin Kace
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15 posted 03-16-2000 06:55 AM       View Profile for Justin Kace   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justin Kace

Justin Kace you think you'll find
Our wondrous wizard easily
Let me tell you all one thing
He'll have protection here from me
To shelter him I'll do my best
This kindly man just needs some rest
Dr.Moose1
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16 posted 03-16-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

I see your pantoum you're raising the stakes
First stop Khartoum in this search that we make
One should have a full deck this to undertake

Playing close to the vest no sweat shall we break
Understood are the rules that the house gets it's take
I see your pantoum you are raising the stakes

Beginning descent buffet and shake
A Silly-bus waits on the ground by a lake
One should have a full deck this to undertake

A thirst for adventure discovery may slake
Though the clues leading here all turned out to be fake
I see your pantoum you are raising the stakes

Airborne once more off tarmac sun baked
Full boat one two three kings over jakes
One should have a full deck this to undertake

We're comin' there Wiz make no mistake
From the 'stute we did stage a major outbreak
I see your pantoum you're raising the stakes
One should have a full deck this to undertake

E.Fudd
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17 posted 03-16-2000 06:05 PM       View Profile for E.Fudd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for E.Fudd

Oh bwother Doc , you've wealwy wost it this thyme !
Do you think you're some secwet agent or something ?
This is wedicuwous , oh , and as for a full deck , that definatwy weaves you out , even I know a pantoum beats a full house !

 Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh
Dr.Moose1
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18 posted 03-16-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

You stay out of this Fudd , you obviously didn't notice that my  "real " hand was five threes with a four in the hole kicker .
So deal yourself out before I have " Ante Em ' take care of my light work !
Jeannie
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19 posted 03-17-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

Master I'm here to help what can I do?
I can blink us all to within the silly bus,
would you like that Master, would you?
Lady in Red now that I'm here to help
you'll be saying your vows to the King
what was that, I heard a very loud yelp?

Andrew Scott
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20 posted 03-17-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Been holding my breath for much too long
And now I hear a Yellow Brick song
Is that Elton or Nurse C
Who is it that's kissing me
I believe things have really gone wrong

This ain't the 'Stute, nor is it Kansas
Hope this ain't the Godfather's last kiss
Is that Doc Moose that I hear
Please tell me Red is now near
It's time to end this paralysis

Oh my! This place really is bizarre
Nurse C! Enough with the C P R
Dear Red its good to see you
Tell me, what now shall we do
Hey Moose, by chance did you bring your car

This yellow path has no speed limit
I'm sure we could go real fast on it
Let us go search for the bus
The one that Wiz hid from us
Everyone pile in! Time to split
Justin Thyme
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21 posted 03-17-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

Thyme to split?
My thoughts exact.
So I did,
and that's a fact.
I will fill you in
real soon.
Is tonight
a half full moon?
Jusin Kace
please watch your backs.
Until then,
I'm in the stacks.

signed,
Justin Thyme, 'Stute escapee.
aka Leonardo DaVinci
former Artiste Extraordinaire
current Library Aide
Dr.Moose1
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22 posted 03-19-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France
Our search cut short by ocean's swell fear Neptune's great puissance
Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance

Washed ashore as we explore the beach's great expanse
A bottle lies before one eye ( the other looks askance)
As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France

Curious I pop the cork and with much extravagance
A Jinn appears with two cold beers and does the Hula dance
Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance

She says since I have set her free our search can now advance
With wave of hand a sea-plane lands and out steps "Tuckett's" Nance
As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France

"The Silly-bus you'll not find here give Kansas one more glance"
By plane then train (this is insane ) we'll have to re-finance
Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance

Another stop along the way by those who are entranced
You can Ron but you can't hide from our vigilance
As we seek the Wiz by Villanelle we're off the coast of France
Ship-wrecked fools A.W.O.L. fate rules by circumstance
Jeannie
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23 posted 03-19-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

The silly bus
will be
my focus
as I nod
my head
to transport
our squad.

The silly bus
to find
will be
a plus
for all of us
so here we go
ready or not
away we
blow.

Oh my stars
where's
Lady in Red,
Andrew,
and
Nurse Crachet?
(I hear a voice)
Vegas Caesar's
palace
oh my,
I did not
mean for any
malice.

Shall we stay here
in Kansas
where the air
is clear
or should we
search
for where
the other's
may be?



So sorry master          
for messing up
must have lost
my concentration
part way through,
sometimes I create
such awful disaster.
Dr.Moose1
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24 posted 03-20-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Just a blink makes one plan toast,hopes the others all are fine
Red eye taken from east coast, now arriving right on time
According to that last signpost ,points this way to the "Grand Design"

The Silly-bus which matters most , with us does intertwine
Yellow roads where road-kill roasts , that which stupefies the mind
Just a blink makes one plan toast , hope the others all are fine

Nothing here but other's ghosts , I'll take the Vegas line
Odds foremost we'll find our host , so says this hunch of mine
According to that last signpost , this way to the "Grand Design"

Excess to the uttermost ,glitz and glamour strike some blind
With our mission we're engrossed ,"Neuf Le Moose" Seven of Nine!
Just a blink makes one plan toast , hopes the others all are fine

Re-financed by a slick riposte , the Jinn and I shall dine
On bouilliabaise from the sea-coast, with fine imported wine
According to the last signpost , this way to the "Grand Design"

Not to post what's innermost , if we were so inclined
Would be negligence most gross , to be poetically unkind
According to that last signpost , this way to the "Grand Design"
Just a blink makes one plan toast , hopes the others all are fine


[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 03-20-2000).]
 
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