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Beach Memory

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angel girl
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0 posted 03-14-2000 03:25 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel girl

Alone on a sandy shore,
Cool water at my feet,
The surf's melodic roar,
And the racing of my heart beat.

Wind blowing through my hair,
Soft lips brushing mine.
In the world no care,
No movement and no time.

Just one perfect moment.
A wonderful memory.
From Heaven it was sent
To keep eternally.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

© Copyright 2000 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-14-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Angel Girl! Very beautiful!

Denise
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-14-2000 04:42 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This does sound like one perfect moment...you have described it perfectly..makes me wish I was there.  James
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3 posted 03-14-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Angel,

This was simply lovely hon! Very impressive...i live at the beach too. I have quite a few "memories" myself. Thanks for making me smile.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 03-15-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This piece has a nice upligting tone.  Nice to read after reading another one you posted that was just the opposite.
Good work.
angel girl
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5 posted 03-19-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thanyou everyone. I lived by the beach for almost 2 years and it was wonderful. I had some really good times there.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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6 posted 03-20-2000 08:03 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

I could picture this. awwwwwww serenity come to me!

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb
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