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Open Poetry #6

Beach Memory

angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2000-03-14 03:25 PM

Alone on a sandy shore,
Cool water at my feet,
The surf's melodic roar,
And the racing of my heart beat.

Wind blowing through my hair,
Soft lips brushing mine.
In the world no care,
No movement and no time.

Just one perfect moment.
A wonderful memory.
From Heaven it was sent
To keep eternally.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-14 03:45 PM

This is beautiful, Angel Girl! Very beautiful!

Denise

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-03-14 04:42 PM

This does sound like one perfect moment...you have described it perfectly..makes me wish I was there. James

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-03-14 06:34 PM

Angel,

This was simply lovely hon! Very impressive...i live at the beach too. I have quite a few "memories" myself. Thanks for making me smile.

Amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

4 posted 2000-03-15 10:50 AM

This piece has a nice upligting tone. Nice to read after reading another one you posted that was just the opposite.
Good work.

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

5 posted 2000-03-19 07:35 AM

Thanyou everyone. I lived by the beach for almost 2 years and it was wonderful. I had some really good times there.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Rosalind Palafox

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Posts 88

6 posted 2000-03-20 08:03 PM

I could picture this. awwwwwww serenity come to me!

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

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