I once attended a poetry reading where the poet read his poem from the bottom of the page and worked his way back up and it had the same circular type of feel as this poem does. This effect seems to work well with the subject of your poem. Also it breaks out of the normal mode of what most of us read and write. For breaking the unordinary, mundane or "mediocre" where minds are already made up, you should be commended!
[This message has been edited by bboog (edited 03-15-2000).]