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Climax (a haiku)

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bboog
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Emerald green eyes.
Widening, upward, glowing.
Sexy semaphores.


© Copyright 2000 Robert Boog - All Rights Reserved
jbouder
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1 posted 03-14-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for jbouder   Email jbouder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jbouder

b-

I'm still thinking about this one which means, at least to me, that you've done a good job with this one.  Eyes as semaphores ... hmmm.  

Jim
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2 posted 03-14-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

BBoog,

Nicely done.  There is indeed something about green eyes that is enchanting.  I applaud your use of semaphore.  While not in common usage...the word is exactly correct.  I see that you were not the least bit subtle about it...lol

INclan
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boogie baby.... very cool
Corinne
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Awesome, bboog!

Cor

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I agree with jbouder and INclan.  Semaphore is the perfect word for green eyes.  Thank you.
bboog
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To Jim, INclan,Local Reb,Cor & LBoyL, Thank you all for taking your time to read and respond. Your donations are tax deductible of course. Now back to reading Harry Potter to my sons!
best regards,
bboog
 
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