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To Share Our Dream

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Loneheart
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0 posted 03-14-2000 12:09 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

To Share Our Dream

Venus with all her glory shall not compare unto thy beauty.
My elusive queen your gaze has bewildered this Knight.
Your face is liken unto a goddess adorned with the shimmerings of love.
Never have mine eyes beheld such wonderous beauty,
though only once have I seen thy beauty
as ye walked in thy garden in full moon.
Ye live on in my dreams by day and by night,
but to have only a glimpse of thee in my dreams
is more than this Knight can endure.
Sorrow engulfs me as my heart crys out,
when shall I hold thy softness,
when shall I taste thy sweetness?
Mine passion for wanting to hold thee and savor thy pleasures
grows stronger with each passing beat of mine heart.
How long shall ye exist only in the corridors of my mind my love?
Shall it be my fate that ye are liken unto a rainbow, that most never find?
Prolong my nights oh Goddess who sets this soul aflame,
and in return I shall burn the whiteness
of thy fingers with mine kisses.
With soft sweet whispers I shall bring forth all thy passions
And to only thee shall mine heart be true.
But alas no one knows what dawn will bring unto this lonely Knight.
Bearing the dismal future with all its sorrows,
I tremble at full day and await till night shall fall but once more
To share our dream
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Marina
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1 posted 03-14-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is wonderful Loneheart! Very romantic and beautiful.

Marina
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-14-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This is beautiful writing loneheart.  I too look for someone special to share my dream.  Hope you find her.  James
Denise
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3 posted 03-14-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Loneheart! Well written!

Denise
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 03-15-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sigh!

HUGS
Enola
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5 posted 03-15-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Wonderful, as always.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
hoot_owl_rn
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*sighs deeply* wow, talk about romantic   Nicely done  
Loneheart
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7 posted 03-15-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

This knight does thank ye one and all for such wonderful
words of kindness.
Though I am not worthy of such praise from so many  truly wonderful poets. Mine heart is humbled with much thankfulness.
As always Thy Servant Loneheart


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A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 03-16-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Another beautiful song, sung by thy hearts cry, another lonely night, with only thy words to keep thee company!  

LOVED THIS ONE!!!       


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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