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My Attempt to Communicate

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Justbleu
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0 posted 03-14-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Another day passing
Within this year
Can you see it
Way above my heart
A glow throughout
Yet tears flow down
Trickling with pain
A numbing ache
You will never know
How you made me feel
You brought me up
Then came crashing down
Inflicted me with doubt
You will never know how you hurt me
That in which caused me to fall apart
For I ran away attempting to repair the pieces
What was I to do
I neither knew your love
Nor felt special with you
I spiraled down without you
It hurt to see you give away
That part of you
I thought I'd caught
You could not belong to only me
God is calling you away for all to see
Wishing I could have stayed strong
Love and strength was all I needed
To hang on and persevere through it
Lack of trust and faith destroyed me
You felt like you were slipping away
Never to return to me my way
Now I am alone within my soul
Not knowing where or when to go
All I know is I loved you so
Whatever happened to the fire that sparked
That blaze that caught my spirit and heart
All I see now is cinders
Laying here dead on the ground

*To the One I Love who will probably NEVER understand* I am not sad, just thought I'd let this out!! This one is for you Justin!!!




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 03-14-2000).]
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infinat3 sadn3ss
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1 posted 03-14-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

i have tried over the past few days to put those exact feelings down on paper but only came up with things that didnt map my feelings.You have done it SO well here.thankyou and i hope you soon realise that,if justin didnt feel the same then whats the point with hurting(like i had to)
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2 posted 03-14-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well written, Justblue! You communicate well.

Denise
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