Dark Angel, And so it has. btw, I love Coleridge
LittleBoyLost, First of all let me say wlecome to Passions. I have not had the pleasure of reading your work as yet but I will surely look for it. I agree with you 100% on the meter, that is always helpful for sure. However, I am curious as to your definition of "forced rhyme". I am always open to critiques on "form" but I am not sure I understand what your meaning is here. Please do clarify, if not here, feel free to email me anytime.
Ruth, from a tear to a sigh... from a sadness to new hope... Healing now, living & loving tomorrow.
hehe, Thanks Mistikman, glad you enjoyed.
Alwye, emotion is always intense - is it not? Doesn't always have to be Dark though.
Kim W, very good, indeed.
Balladeer, I am humbled to get a "WHOOA!!" from you, 'tis a great honor.
Satiate, glad to get something ticking in your head... Thinking is good, just don't over do it... you might end up skitzed out like me.
jbowie, It's like any medicine. You know it's good for you but sometimes you have to force yourself to take it. You have a keen eye, my friend.
Rebecca, I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you all for the kind replies.
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