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Sunrise Haiku
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Sunrise Haiku |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Apple-cheeked rosy glow Rises across yon meadow Sending smiles to face ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, I love this, what is Haiku???? Cerenity |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Come on Marge write some more like this....please. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
This is a lovely little Haiku. You do them beautifully Marge. Poeminister |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so 'sunny'!!  Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like the daffodils the poet stems and flowers bending like the breeze. Here's to you, Marge! Cor |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I coo... I coo.... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marge, I so enjoy the sunrises....specially when I am on vacation at the lake. Thank you for capturing this one for us. INclan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Haiku is a Japanese poetic form usually written in 5-7-5 syllabic form expressing joy or wonder, usually about nature. Many variations are done today. Give it a try. They are addicting !  Sun peeks over hill Sparrows sing in morning song All is bright with life UK~ Ahhhh ! 'Tis my pleasure. Spring rain refreshes No umbrellas needed here Caught in the drizzle PoeMinister~ I love them ... I do ! Joy is mine to share Pine needle fragrance on breeze Sharing joy with friend Denise~ Yeah ! Breezes of the Spring Wafting orange blossom fragrance Florida in bloom Corinne~ I LOVE IT ! Thank you. Puddle lays waiting Child at play spies mini-lake Splishing and splashing Rebel~ Coo of turtle dove Lulls me to serenity Bird, you sing my song INclan~ Sunrise over lake Retreats at end of the day Breathless joy is ours Thank you all. You stir me to pen them. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
My hands reaching up Dashing across the meadow What a pretty day!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ That is so lovely. Sun on the morning Rises within each new smile Touched by your friendship ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge Your the Haiku Queen, From Sunshine to You You amaze with 5-7-5 a blaze of three lines. Parker |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Pale crocus blossoms Peaking shyly through the snow Welcome morning sun I love Haikus too Marge, they are so fun to do and so expressive in just a few words Small seed lays dormant Underneath thick winter snow Hope springs eternal ~ Butterfly flies high Cocoon lies on grown below Symbol of freedom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ Love your Haiku from Florida sunshine shores ~*~ Sunshine IS my state Mind and body to elate Florida, my home ~*~ Hoot~ Pretty gosh-darned good there, gal. ~*~ Naked in the sun No strap marks across my skin Love the skin I'm in ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh, Marge - you're a bottomless poetic pit!! ... and they're all good!!
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Why look at you Haiku ! I love it. ~*~ Sun soon slips softly Through window as curtains close Moon is on the way ~*Marge*~ |
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