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Sunrise Haiku

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Marge Tindal
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Apple-cheeked rosy glow
Rises across yon meadow
Sending smiles to face




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Hi Marge,

I love this, what is Haiku????

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Come on Marge write some more like this....please.
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This is a lovely little Haiku.  You do them beautifully Marge.

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This is so 'sunny'!!  

Denise
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Like the daffodils
the poet stems and flowers
bending like the breeze.

Here's to you, Marge!

Cor
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I coo... I coo....
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Marge,

I so enjoy the sunrises....specially when I am on vacation at the lake.  Thank you for capturing this one for us.

INclan
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Cerenity~
Haiku is a Japanese poetic form usually written in 5-7-5 syllabic form expressing joy or wonder, usually about nature.  Many variations are done today.
Give it a try.  They are addicting !  

Sun peeks over hill
Sparrows sing in morning song
All is bright with life

UK~
Ahhhh !  'Tis my pleasure.

Spring rain refreshes
No umbrellas needed here
Caught in the drizzle



PoeMinister~
I love them ... I do !

Joy is mine to share
Pine needle fragrance on breeze
Sharing joy with friend

Denise~
Yeah !  

Breezes of the Spring
Wafting orange blossom fragrance
Florida in bloom


Corinne~
I LOVE IT ! Thank you.

Puddle lays waiting
Child at play spies mini-lake
Splishing and splashing

Rebel~

Coo of turtle dove
Lulls me to serenity
Bird, you sing my song


INclan~

Sunrise over lake
Retreats at end of the day
Breathless joy is ours

Thank you all.
You stir me to pen them.
~*Marge*~




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My hands reaching up
Dashing across the meadow
What a pretty day!!
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Kaile~

That is so lovely.

Sun on the morning
Rises within each new smile
Touched by your friendship

~*Marge*~


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Marge Your the Haiku Queen,

From Sunshine to You
You amaze with 5-7-5
a blaze of three lines.

Parker
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Pale crocus blossoms
Peaking shyly through the snow
Welcome morning sun

I love Haikus too Marge, they are so fun to do and so expressive in just a few words  

Small seed lays dormant
Underneath thick winter snow
Hope springs eternal

~
Butterfly flies high
Cocoon lies on grown below
Symbol of freedom


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Parker~
Love your Haiku from Florida sunshine shores

~*~
Sunshine IS my state
Mind and body to elate
Florida, my home


~*~

Hoot~
Pretty gosh-darned good there, gal.

~*~
Naked in the sun
No strap marks across my skin
Love the skin I'm in !



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Geesh, Marge - you're a bottomless poetic pit!!
... and they're all good!!


The breath of new morn
Tiptoes upon cirrus blush
Fresh auroran dreams

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Nan~
Why look at you Haiku !
I love it.

~*~

Sun soon slips softly
Through window as curtains close
Moon is on the way

~*Marge*~

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