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Someplace - Sometime - Somehow
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Someplace - Sometime - Somehow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Someplace - Sometime - Somehow ~Marge Tindal~ In some other place some other time I have languished in love with you We have been before where we are now in love with a love so true Some other place some other time another love so true This is here this is now I'm still in love with you We have walked this way before The scene is still the same I know the sound of your voice when you call out my name I have loved you before but never greater than I do now someplace sometime somehow ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Marge this is exquisite. I feel the same about my man. You expressed my feelings so well  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ I am glad that it touched your heartstrings. That gets my day off to a great start. Thank you for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marge, you were up pretty early posting this piece. Very nice. You are such a marvelous poet. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Another beautiful piece from a beautiful soul |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Marge I really like this one. This probably one of my favourites from you. It is simply beautiful,I love it. Marina |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautiful work, well done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ That darned little muse wakes me at will. Thank you, sweetie. Hoot~ Thank you so much. Back at 'cha gal ! Marina~ Thank you, hon. Mike~ I appreciate it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful writing Marge... as always loved it! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful and touching poem here, Marge. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Another lovely poem. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge, This was simple beautiful! This one really touched my heart in a big way. Exquisite! You are a wonderful poet with a beautiful heart and soul. I truly enjoying reading your work. Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ I think yours is better than mine  Very nice work Marge~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I thank you and want to say that it is always a pleasure to be 'Denised' You mean so much to all of us here. Thank you for your joy and dedication. DarkAngel~ I am so pleased that it touched you. Elizabeth~ Thank you for letting me know. PoeMinister~ So very glad that you enjoyed. Amy~ What a very sweet comment. If I've touched your heart ... mine has also been touched. Marie~ Thank you, hon. I think they are just different ... never better. This one was about having loved someone in another 'life' or 'time' and 'place' and realizing that he has always been in my heart for all time. I greatly enjoy what you write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Marge, more lovely love from you--and so beautiful! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
In another life, perhaps, Marge?? Very well could be. It's easy to believe in spirits passed from generation to generation and those are what we recognize and sense in others.... Could you have been Cleopatra? And me Marc Antony? Perhaps you were a geisha girl Who used to pamper me.. Or maybe you were Gueneviere And I your Lancelot Or you were Eve and I was Adam.. Maybe......maybe not. You might have been Maid Marion And I your Robin Hood Or maybe you were Joan of Arc (I bent and lit the wood) You could have been sweet Jezebel Who made men's blood run hot And I am still in love with you Maybe....maybe not. |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
BEAUTIFUL, anything written with this kind of love can be no less. This is a lot like my poem I wrote about the aging couple and my wife. You though, expressed the meaning fully with very few words and it carried such emotion that I must say you and this other are very lucky. (if this is real of course) thanks for the bright spark to my day. A real man kisses his children goodnight |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ You know my heart so well. Thank you. Balladeer~ The spirits of other lives walk my heart. LOVE YOUR RESPONSE ... AS ALWAYS You are 'something else' ... love ya' JimB~ Thank you for liking. All love is REAL. Now, where can I find the poem you speak of? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge every time I read something of yours I find it just the most beautiful thing and this is no exception. Cheers to the Magnificant Marge LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ What a sweetheart you are. It is no wonder to me that you bear my daughter's name. Kindred souls. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Marge! Cor |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
marge it was called childhood in PP #6 was supposed to be titled "of another life" just use the search and you will find that you even commented on it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Thanks, hon. Jim~ Yes .... I re-read it today. Yours is such a romantic story. I related. Thank you so much. I like the comparison. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
This is excellent Marge, really pulls at the heart strings. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mistik~ Thank you, sweetie. Love does have a way of doing that, doesn't it? I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Love ya' ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-16-2000).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gotta LOVE Marge's lovely lovesongs... Wonderfully melodious, my friend..  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kindred spirits indeed I always feel drawn to you LoL Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cool poem, and I mean chilling, great, your poetry always seems to touch my soul . The more I read the more I want to read . L.Of.L . Tom . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thank you for your kindness, my friend. Tracie~ Spirits of friendship are meant to touch. When we share our souls with others ... we gain more than we gave. Thanks, love. Tom~ Lots of love to you too. I am pleased that you are touched by the words I have to offer. Thank you for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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