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Open Poetry #6

My Love

ken
Junior Member

since 2000-03-10

Posts 49
RI

0 posted 2000-03-13 05:55 PM

With every breath I take
My love lives on
With every waking day
My love continues
With all my strength
My love will hold you
With all my heart
My devotion is for you
With every touch
My love will show warmth
With every thought
My love dreams on
With anything I do
My love for you goes with me
With all that is good and bad
My love will care for you

Thank you for being my love

demonic~angel
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 54
Kansas

1 posted 2000-03-13 07:43 PM

Thats good and astounds me...awesome work..

Carpe Diem...

Dusk Treader

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

2 posted 2000-03-13 11:35 PM

Good poem here but since it is a poem I'll be moving it to Open #6. Don't be afraid to contact me if you have any questions.

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

3 posted 2000-03-13 11:38 PM

This is very touching~
Nice work~
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-13 11:40 PM

Ken, this is a lovely poem!

Denise

MyPenNameIsSam
Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 94
usa

5 posted 2000-03-14 12:05 PM

wish i could find someone like you...
lovely poem

-molly aka sam

"One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide

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