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mariee66
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0 posted 03-13-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

What if




What if I told you I love you...
Would you turn me away?
Would you embrace me and share your soul yet another day?

What if together we were meant to be...
Would you turn me away?
Would you look at me and love me forever and a day?

What if it was never too late for love...
Would you turn me away?
Would you share your world with me from that day?

What if true love came to you once more...
Would you turn me away?
Would you see the love we're longing for and cherish it day to day?

What if I could not live with out you...
Would you turn me away?
Would you take me and love me for every moment in every day?

What if tomorrow we could be together...
Would you turn me away?
Would you take my hand and walk by my side together into the days?

....For Randy....

© Copyright 2000 Marie E. - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-13-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely poem, Marie, full of longing. I'm sure he'll love it!

Denise
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2 posted 03-14-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

this is beautiful mariee   I miss being in love   *sigh* But I'm happy for you  
-molly aka sam

 "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide

Marina
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3 posted 03-14-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

this is a really good poem Marie.  Certainly something I can relate to.   Oh, love the dolphin!

Marina
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4 posted 03-14-2000 03:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mariee~

Such lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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mariee66
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5 posted 03-14-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Thank you Denise~  
Yeah, it's full of longing~

Molly... thanks much~
True love will find you one day~

Marina... Glad you liked it~
The dolphin is sort of symbolic... had to use it  ~

Marge... your poem on longing was great~
Thanks for your reply~

Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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6 posted 03-14-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Marie

This poem was written with such passion and intensity. a lucky guy he is! kudos to you for writing a beautiful poem.

take care,
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
NewbiePoetGuy
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Marie, that was a truly excellent poem.
I know how you feel, believe me.
best of luck to you in all your pursuits whether they be romantice or otherwise,
                                        Larry
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mariee ... what if ... you show him this poem and give him a sad eyed smile ... turns most guys to mush

Rex}<{{{{o>
jazzgal
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9 posted 03-14-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for jazzgal   Email jazzgal   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jazzgal

Mariee, this surely is a heart felt one.  I love it!  Has he read this yet?
May
mariee66
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Amy~
Thank you for the compliments   ~

Larry~
Thank you, too, for the compliments~
I wish you the best as well~
May both our hearts one day no longer know what longing is~

Rex~
Too many miles are between Rand and me~
When(if) I see him, I'll try that tactic   ~  

May~
Yes he has read it~
I didn't get the reply I was hoping for... sigh... ~

Thanks all~~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Zelda
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11 posted 03-17-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Marie,
This was great-- full of longing.
I hope you and Randy will someday be together.
You are in my thoughts.
Z
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12 posted 03-17-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I really like your poem! the format, the questioning! it was great!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


mariee66
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13 posted 03-18-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Thanks Liz (aka Z)~
Someday.... ~

RH~
That was very kind of you~
Thanks much~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

 
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