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lol, i need some asprin

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Kevin
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0 posted 03-13-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

If you were I and I were you
do you think what you'd do Id do?
and if this very thing were true
than wouldnt you do what Id do?
and if we thought everything through
than Id be me and you'd be you...
so if your brain is hurting too...
I guess that makes at least us two =)
© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-13-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for star83   Email star83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for star83

Very cute. Sounds similar to this one poet who wrote with confusing questions. Nicely done.

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ghost; everybody talks
about it but few have
seen it."
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2 posted 03-13-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

If I were you I wouldn't try
To figure out what you and I
would try to do if you were me
And I became your entity.
If I were you, I'm sure I would
Do what you do, if I could
If I were there inside your skin
Hey, pass around that aspirin!  
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3 posted 03-13-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

ROFL   Two great poems! Thanks guys!
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4 posted 03-14-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

lol--you guys are both great    You just have to love it when you brain plays those tricks on you and makes you think about stuff like that lol
-molly aka sam

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5 posted 03-14-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Very cute!

Corinne
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6 posted 03-14-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin~

If you were me
then I think
that from now on
you'd look good in PINK

Then again
if I were you
I'd be caught
in shades of BLUE

If I were you
and you were me
what a MESS
our clothes would be!

Marge in BLUE
Kevin in PINK
Oh, my God !
What will folks think?
      
~*Marge*~





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7 posted 03-14-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Kevin's poem made me smile
Than 'Deer and Marge both added grins
But now I'm thoroughly confused
Please someone pass those aspirin! LOL
Kevin
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8 posted 03-14-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

oh marge and deer
if I were youz'
id surely cheer
of what ensues

for with your age
and sheer decorum
Id load the page:
"Adult Forum"

=)
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9 posted 03-14-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

double post


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