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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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If you were I and I were you do you think what you'd do I’d do? and if this very thing were true than wouldn’t you do what I’d do? and if we thought everything through than I’d be me and you'd be you... so if your brain is hurting too... I guess that makes at least us two =) |
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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
Very cute. Sounds similar to this one poet who wrote with confusing questions. Nicely done. "True love is like a ghost; everybody talks about it but few have seen it." La Rochefoucauld |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If I were you I wouldn't try To figure out what you and I would try to do if you were me And I became your entity. If I were you, I'm sure I would Do what you do, if I could If I were there inside your skin Hey, pass around that aspirin!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  Two great poems! Thanks guys! |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
lol--you guys are both great  You just have to love it when you brain plays those tricks on you and makes you think about stuff like that lol-molly aka sam "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very cute! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ If you were me then I think that from now on you'd look good in PINK Then again if I were you I'd be caught in shades of BLUE If I were you and you were me what a MESS our clothes would be! Marge in BLUE Kevin in PINK Oh, my God ! What will folks think?  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kevin's poem made me smile Than 'Deer and Marge both added grins But now I'm thoroughly confused Please someone pass those aspirin! LOL |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
oh marge and deer if I were youz' id surely cheer of what ensues for with your age and sheer decorum I’d load the page: "Adult Forum" =) |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
double post [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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