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LunarFlame New Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 9Nova scotia, Canada |
Lost is my heart and part of my soul, my life is so shattered, my emotions are cold. the core of my life is hidden so well, surrounded by layers of personal hell. Secrets and dreams kept in seclusion, my existance, no more that a simple illusion. to have been noticed in this world and appreciated would have given me a life less isolated. they think they really understand my feelings, but none of them see the real pain im conceiling. too occupied with their own to care about me, ill wait until they suffer, then i will succeed. I'd rather be liked for more than appearance, my talent, my courage or being so fearless. Im hoping one day they will open their eyes, they'll see my real beauty, my beauty inside 8oÞ much luv and marshmallows, LunarFlame(LF) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The pain is evident in this. Sometimes we have to open up and make people listen to the pain we are feeling. It's not healthy to live in a shell for very long. You have expressed a sad situation very well. Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi LunarFlame, I really like the lines, surrounded by personal hell, and cold emotions. Very nice poem thanks for the read, Cerenity Welcome to passions [This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 03-14-2000).] |
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