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Phire
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Anderson, South Carolina, USA


0 posted 03-13-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Phire   Email Phire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phire

The darkness of the day
Slowly fades away
Falling to the wonderful light
Of a beautiful night

But the beauty of the stars
Shining from afar
Lights in the sky
made dim by your eyes

Dancing in the rain
My love you would gain
From the first night alone with you
I knew I couldn't live without you

From the first kiss
Ours was a love filled with bliss
It was all so perfect
And even now I know it was worth it

Everything I was to gain
Would far outweigh the pain
Now you're lost
Never to fade away like the cold morning frost

Forever I thought I would mourn
No other love to ever be born
Now the thought of you
Pushes me to continue

Life without you is such a hassle
But I know, one day we'll share a castle
And I'll play this game till I win
Just to see your smile again
© Copyright 2000 James McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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since 11-09-1999
Posts 397
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1 posted 03-13-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

First of all...

Welcome to Passions!  

And second of all, this is a lovely poem.  It rhymes too; that's a feat for me and so applause for another talented poet joining the ranks of Passions.  We'd do anything to see someone special smile.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Phire
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2 posted 03-13-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Phire   Email Phire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phire

Thanks for the kind words.  I appreciate any and all criticism, and I look forward to posting and reading here in the future.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 03-13-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Check your email...
Denise
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4 posted 03-13-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Phire! This is a wonderful, touching poem!

Denise
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Phire~
Lovely opening act.
Welcome to Passion's.
Look forward to Act II.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MyPenNameIsSam
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since 03-06-2000
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6 posted 03-14-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

Beautiful poem, Phire    Very well written with a wonderful sense of feeling behind it  
-molly aka sam
p.s.
you know-you can make a profile for youself if you'd like to by clicking on the word "members" at the top of the screen and you can check out other people's profiles by clicking on the far left icon that looks like paper and a quill pen in the blue bar by each person's name.   just thought I'd let you know. OH!  And welcome to  Passions Poetry  

 "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide

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