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The Pouring Rain
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The Pouring Rain |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Clouds go by as I look to the sky Freezes me in the in-between Busy with life’s comings and goings Not pausing to see Not ever wondering why Time still remains for all just the same Can’t forget the last dream In which I had my peace of mind Don’t know what a day like today means Suddenly I remember her name And it starts pouring rain Everyone should sometimes come undone And let that feeling flow through The most peaceful time of day What wonders solitude can do Just letting the raindrops come I have no shame watching the rain Nothing will ever satisfy me The way I am with opened mind A spirit finally set free Suddenly I forget her name And it keeps pouring rain |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I have no shame watching the rain" ...exquisite sensory sentiment here, and beautifully expressed. Wonderful piece of writing. ~ Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
...everyone should sometimes come undone... excellent poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you come undone exquisitly...  loved this one... longingly perfect(smile) stalking you always, jm |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you ladies. Thank you so much. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful writing, JML! This is great! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JML this was absolutely fantastic! It was mystical and powerful...the rain is something to be in awe of for sure. Your poem swept me away and made me feel as though I was a part of this "picture". Thanks for making me smile. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, I needed that serenity, just then, just now. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML~ 'Nothing will ever satisfy me The way I am with opened mind A spirit finally set free Suddenly I forget her name And it keeps pouring rain' FANTASMA! ~Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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