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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 2000-03-13 04:18 PM


Together Drawing Masterpieces

Together drawing masterpieces
in the silence of their world,
colorful hues expressing emotion
upon yellow brick roads of time.

Some blue to express eternity
some white for innocence
some red to express depth of soul
some green for strength
some yellow to express unity
some black for passion
some purple to express devotion
some maroon for determination

Together drawing masterpieces
as the minutes of time tick by,
and elements of emotion come to life.

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-13 04:22 PM


WOW!! You have drawn a masterpiece with this one, NC! This is exquisite!

Denise

Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 2000-03-14 06:16 AM


dsnyder, Thank you glad you enjoyed it.
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3 posted 2000-03-14 06:27 AM


NurseC~
Just wonderful.

'colorful hues expressing emotion
upon yellow brick roads of time'

Such a vivid image.
I really like what you're doing with this.
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 2000-03-14 12:20 PM


Well Nurse Crachet
I see you can match it,
with colors all mixed
you really are quite fixed.
You use the Kings wax sticks
creating colorful flaming wicks
of designs to guide us out of here,
it's obvious you do hold us all very dear.

Nurse Crachet
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5 posted 2000-03-14 07:53 PM


Marge, Thank you, glad you like it.

ONE FLEW, Kind of you to notice, and of course this Nurse cares so watch carefully as you go along seems no one is safe from the spell.

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