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infinat3 sadn3ss
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since 2000-02-14
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somerset england

0 posted 2000-03-13 04:13 PM


I know what you are trying to do,
and i will never falter .
I can see what you are trying to prove
but i will never alter ..
..myself for you.
However much i cry,
ill never stop to ask myself "why".
I am stronger than you think i am.
I can crush the world in the palm of my hand.
However much you say or do
Ill never come running back to you.

© Copyright 2000 mike cable - All Rights Reserved
Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
1 posted 2000-03-13 06:24 PM


You go Girl!!! Great poem and welcome to Passions!!

Marina

Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-13 08:03 PM


Great poem! Full of personal strength and conviction! I like it!

Denise

infinat3 sadn3ss
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since 2000-02-14
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somerset england
3 posted 2000-03-14 08:28 AM


thanks guys.but marina,im a bloke.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-03-14 03:23 PM


This is good writing...James
mete out
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since 2000-02-16
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england
5 posted 2000-03-15 08:32 AM


Way to go Cable!
Fantastic one is this.

You keep this frame of mind because i KNOW you are capable of just about anything...

Love ya...Lou  xx



 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Enola
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 138
England
6 posted 2000-03-15 11:33 AM


You ARE a hell of a long stronger than she is.  You don't need her anyway because you've got us.  Your best poem yet, I think - keep it up.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

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