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Lucky but Unhappy
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0 posted 03-13-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Lucky but Unhappy   Email Lucky but Unhappy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucky but Unhappy

It's your love I desire
To think of you
Sets my heart on fire
Your hands to hold me strong
Your lips to kiss me so long
Your body to dance with mine
Your love to make my heart shine
I can't wait for the day
When you come to take me away
A place to be together
And make it last forever
Passionate lovemaking we can share
I want only you
No one else can compare
All the things we can do
It will be so good
Like no other girl could
Caress me
Hold me
Kiss me
Hold me
Make me scream
MAke me cry
I want only you
I tell you no lie
I miss you so much
I miss you more
You are someone
That I adore

© Copyright 2000 Shamika Legaree - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 03-13-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Nice poem you have here, but it is a poem, so I'll be moving it to Open #6 for you.  

 Abrahm Simons

Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.


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2 posted 03-13-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Lucky! This is a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this! Please check you email for a special welcome!

Denise
 
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