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~His Way With Words~
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~His Way With Words~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~His Way With Words~ With in your words...contentment found, of your offerings ... my intrigue bound. Immerse me in your sensual depths, baptized in the surrender...I am sweetly swept. Seduced by whispered subtle pleas... enchanted by your grace, your poetic expertise. Anticipation replaces longing and resign... fascination born of desires design. Drawn into your poetice reprieve... elevated by the words, passion conceived. Captivated by cryptic confessions, entranced by mystical obsessions. Allow your poetic cascade to wash over me ... the beauty of your words shall set me free. Janet Marie Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Janet Marie~ This is just EXQUISITE ! Totally enchanting. Tender, soft and adorned with love. Beautiful format and form. Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I have to agree with Marge. Simply...wow! I wouldn't change a thing. Absolute perfection here, seriously...or at least i think so. This is so unlike your other works, so full of sensuality and longing i mean...what brought this out? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tender, passionate and well done poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes and the beauty of your words as well. So beautiful and so superb. James |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Can I breathe now?? This is so "ahhhhh". I love the words you have chosen. Excellent! |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Where did you manage to find such a wonderful man? Nice job. Your words flowed smoothly and beautifully. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'poetic cascade' I love that!! This is very beautiful, Janet Marie! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Jan And to think i ALMOST missed this one! I am surely glad I did not. This was so beautiful! It is nice to see another "side" to your work. Your talent continues to amaze me. Thanks. AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow... you guys are making me blush and smile...thank you much...I was a little nervous about this one...as amy and jml said its a different kind of poem for me... SO thanks for the AHHHHS....LOL that was what i was trying for...(smile) and jer...if I told ya where this one came from that would take away all the "intrigue" ...lets just say someone "offered" me some really AAAAAAHHH inspiration...  thanks to ALL who replied with such sweet encouragement. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Janet... this is beautiful!! It's so nice to see that someone has inspired such feelings in you. .. it's nice to have a muse, isn't it? -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Not used to this "style" from you Janet but you've done beautifully with it. Heartwarming work. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet, this is incredible... |
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jazzgal Junior Member
since 2000-03-07
Posts 37 |
From the replies I've read, I can tell that you don't write this way often... but I encourage you to do so because this one was breathtaking!... For reals. May |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
So does he have a brother ~Breathtaking poem~ I really enjoyed this one~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I certainly envy the man this was written for! Excellent work here..... |
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