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~His Way With Words~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 03-13-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie


~His Way With Words~

With in your words...contentment found,
of your offerings ... my intrigue bound.
Immerse me in your sensual depths,
baptized in the surrender...I am sweetly swept.
Seduced by whispered subtle pleas...
enchanted by your grace, your poetic expertise.
Anticipation replaces longing and resign...
fascination born of desires design.
Drawn into your poetice reprieve...
elevated by the words, passion conceived.
Captivated by cryptic confessions,
entranced by mystical obsessions.
Allow your poetic cascade to wash over me ...
the beauty of your words shall set me free.


Janet Marie


 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-13-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Janet Marie~
This is just EXQUISITE !
Totally enchanting.
Tender, soft and adorned with love.
Beautiful format and form.
Wonderful !
~*Marge*~


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PoeticKnight
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2 posted 03-13-2000 03:16 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

I have to agree with Marge. Simply...wow! I wouldn't change a thing. Absolute perfection here, seriously...or at least i think so. This is so unlike your other works, so full of sensuality and longing i mean...what brought this out?
Martie
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3 posted 03-13-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Tender, passionate and well done poem!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 03-13-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes and the beauty of your words as well.  So beautiful and so superb.   James
Shelley
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5 posted 03-13-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

Can I breathe now??  This is so "ahhhhh".
I love the words you have chosen.

Excellent!
angel girl
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within a whisper...


6 posted 03-13-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Where did you manage to find such a wonderful man?
Nice job. Your words flowed smoothly and beautifully.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Denise
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7 posted 03-13-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

'poetic cascade' I love that!! This is very beautiful, Janet Marie!

Denise
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8 posted 03-13-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Jan

And to think i ALMOST missed this one! I am surely glad I did not. This was so beautiful! It is nice to see another "side" to your work. Your talent continues to amaze me. Thanks.

AMY  

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Janet Marie
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9 posted 03-13-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

wow... you guys are making me blush and smile...thank you much...I was a little nervous about this one...as amy and jml said its a different kind of poem for me...
SO thanks for the AHHHHS....LOL
that was what i was trying for...(smile)

and jer...if I told ya where this one came from that would take away all the "intrigue"
...lets just say someone "offered" me some really AAAAAAHHH inspiration...
thanks to ALL who replied with such sweet encouragement.
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


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10 posted 03-13-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Janet... this is beautiful!!  It's so nice to see that someone has inspired such feelings in you. .. it's nice to have a muse, isn't it?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Michael
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11 posted 03-14-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Not used to this "style" from you Janet but you've done beautifully with it.  Heartwarming work.

Michael
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12 posted 03-14-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Janet, this is incredible...
jazzgal
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From the replies I've read, I can tell that you don't write this way often... but I encourage you to do so because this one was breathtaking!...  For reals.  
May
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14 posted 03-14-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

So does he have a brother   ~
Breathtaking poem~
I really enjoyed this one~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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15 posted 03-14-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I certainly envy the man this was written for! Excellent work here.....
 
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