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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-03-13 01:51 PM

I take you gently in my arms.
...and feel your warm embrace,
As light of heaven's stars above,
...shine down upon your face.

I see the glow of all my dreams,
...within your beauty there,
I touch upon moon's silver beams,
...as stroke your silken hair.

I hear sweet music of the muse,
...we dance throughout the night,
Free as the summer winds that blow,
...our hearts as one unite.

You are my goddess, Aphrodite,
...you touch within my soul,
And leave therein a satin bloom,
...a rose that makes me whole.

Am touched by splendor of the rose,
...as hear your siren's song,
Breathing in your fragrant scent,
...I capture all I long.

Elysian delights unfold,
...sweet treasures lay inside,
Then from the east the rising sun,
...day's portal opens wide.

As sun's first rays steal through the trees,
... morn chases way the night,
You gently place your lips on mine,
...I taste of love's delight.

I whisper softly to the wind,
...I'll love her evermore,
I'll sing to you love's madrigal,
...I'll love you evermore.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2000-03-13 02:01 PM

Sigh...the splendor of your love of Rose poetry is unequaled.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-13 03:41 PM

This is so romantically beautiful as are all your Rose poems! Beautiful!!

Denise

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-03-13 07:35 PM

Sigh! There could never be a lovelier poem! This is so beautiful...you sir are a romantic poet of the truest sense....

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-03-13 07:39 PM

A rose by any other name... You've heard of the "Rose Queen"? I hereby dub thee the "Rose King"...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-03-13 10:09 PM

Mike~
I'll take a dozen!
FTD is fine.
Credit Cards welcomed.
Loved it in case you couldn't tell.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-03-13 10:16 PM

Romanticly beautiful

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 2000-03-13 10:36 PM

So beautiful..you've left me breathless. So romantic, the words just swept me away..

*Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

8 posted 2000-03-14 01:46 AM

Wooo~
That sent my pulse racing~
Your poem was absolutely breathtaking~
Whew!~
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

MyPenNameIsSam
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 94
usa

9 posted 2000-03-14 02:16 AM

beautiful beautiful beautiful

-molly aka sam

"One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

10 posted 2000-03-14 10:11 AM

Hi Mike,

I am in shock at the beauty and romance. This is a work of ART, Thank you so much I will remember this one forever...

Cerenity

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

11 posted 2000-03-14 03:17 PM

Thank you all so kindly for your replies. I do have a thing for roses.

angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

12 posted 2000-03-14 03:28 PM

Wonderful! Beautiful! And, oh, so romantic.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

13 posted 2000-03-15 09:23 PM

I love the style in which you write sir...so easy to read, and so easy to be swept away by your words...Not too many men are capable of doing that....writing with such intense passion. Your words are so magical, they dazzle any who read. Your poems are never long enough for me...just when I'm being swept away, they end! LOL

Please, quit your day job, and write more!!! LOL

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

14 posted 2000-03-15 10:19 PM

You had me with the title and kept me with rest, this one went straight to my heart.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

15 posted 2000-03-22 04:09 AM

Sing to loves song,
Thy heart longs to hear,

The nightingale awaits,
For thy whispers in her ear,

I have yearned for thee, thy style of poetry,
Forever leaves its mark,

unto this fair maiden, A Romantic Heart,
For you and I are not of this century,

We meet from days of the past,
From the era of Shakespeares time,

Where our souls were once entwined...

Breath takeing.....sooo romantic and beautiful, passionate, I copied this one for keeps!!

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"Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-22-2000).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2000-03-22 04:39 AM

I really liked this its sooooo smooth and romantic..I was reading it out loud and when I arrived at the line "I whisper softly to the wind..I'll love her evermore" I was really touched. James

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