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Evermore My Rose

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Mike
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0 posted 03-13-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike


I take you gently in my arms.
...and feel your warm embrace,
As light of heaven's stars above,
...shine down upon your face.

I see the glow of all my dreams,
...within your beauty there,
I touch upon moon's silver beams,
...as stroke your silken hair.

I hear sweet music of the muse,
...we dance throughout the night,
Free as the summer winds that blow,
...our hearts as one unite.

You are my goddess, Aphrodite,
...you touch within my soul,
And leave therein a satin bloom,
...a rose that makes me whole.

Am touched by splendor of the rose,
...as hear your siren's song,
Breathing in your fragrant scent,
...I capture all I long.

Elysian delights unfold,
...sweet treasures lay inside,
Then from the east the rising sun,
...day's portal opens wide.

As sun's first rays steal through the trees,
... morn chases way the night,
You gently place your lips on mine,
...I taste of love's delight.

I whisper softly to the wind,
...I'll love her evermore,
I'll sing to you love's madrigal,
...I'll love you evermore.
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 03-13-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sigh...the splendor of your love of Rose poetry is unequaled.  
Denise
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2 posted 03-13-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so romantically beautiful as are all your Rose poems! Beautiful!!

Denise
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3 posted 03-13-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sigh! There could never be a lovelier poem! This is so beautiful...you sir are a romantic poet of the truest sense....  
Nan
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4 posted 03-13-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

A rose by any other name... You've heard of the "Rose Queen"? I hereby dub thee the "Rose King"...  
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5 posted 03-13-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike~
I'll take a dozen!
FTD is fine.
Credit Cards welcomed.
Loved it in case you couldn't tell.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 03-13-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Romanticly beautiful
Alwye
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7 posted 03-13-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So beautiful..you've left me breathless.  So romantic, the words just swept me away..

 *Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB

mariee66
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8 posted 03-14-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Wooo~
That sent my pulse racing~
Your poem was absolutely breathtaking~
Whew!~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

MyPenNameIsSam
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9 posted 03-14-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

beautiful beautiful beautiful      
-molly aka sam

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10 posted 03-14-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Mike,

I am in shock at the beauty and romance. This is a work of ART, Thank you so much I will remember this one forever...

Cerenity
Mike
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11 posted 03-14-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank you all so kindly for your replies.  I do have a thing for roses.
angel girl
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within a whisper...


12 posted 03-14-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Wonderful! Beautiful! And, oh, so romantic.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 03-15-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I love the style in which you write sir...so easy to read, and so easy to be swept away by your words...Not too many men are capable of doing that....writing with such intense passion.  Your words are so magical, they dazzle any who read.  Your poems are never long enough for me...just when I'm being swept away, they end!  LOL     Please, quit your day job, and write more!!!  LOL
Butterflies_dont_cry
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14 posted 03-15-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

You had me with the title and kept me with rest, this one went straight to my heart.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


15 posted 03-22-2000 04:09 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Sing to loves song,
Thy heart longs to hear,

The nightingale awaits,
For thy whispers in her ear,

I have yearned for thee, thy style of poetry,
Forever leaves its mark,

unto this fair maiden, A Romantic Heart,
For you and I are not of this century,

We meet from days of the past,
From the era of Shakespeares time,

Where our souls were once entwined...

Breath takeing.....sooo romantic and beautiful, passionate, I copied this one for keeps!!  



 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-22-2000).]
JamesMichael
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16 posted 03-22-2000 04:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I really liked this its sooooo smooth and romantic..I was reading it out loud and when I arrived at the line "I whisper softly to the wind..I'll love her evermore" I was really touched.   James
 
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