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A Soft place to Fall

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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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25 posted 04-05-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Sir Holloway, Sounds like she's delighted with your castle too, offering you a soft place to fall. together the softness can be a journey to paradise.
hsystems
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26 posted 04-05-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Danny - WOW!  This is the first of your poems that I am aware of having read, and I wonder what took me so long!  Your gift is truly a treasure - thanks so much for sharing it with the rest of us!

I, too, have had someone in my life who was a  "soft place to fall."  But, in contrast to some of the previous comments, she and I were  actually just incredibly good friends, neither of us wanting more than that.  In fact, when she fell in love with a very good man and he asked her to marry him, she asked my permission!

Thanks again for sharing your beautiful gift!


Troy

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Janet Marie
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27 posted 04-05-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

dont ya just love poetic fate(smile)

I just love when others prove my point for me.
I just love being right  (it dont happen very often) LOL
thank you danny-boy...I'm glad I made this discovery too...
jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger
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on the threshold of a dream


28 posted 04-05-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is great, Danny... well done!
Lone Wolf
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29 posted 04-06-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Danny....did not get to read this sooner.  Wow, I almost missed a gem!!!  This is wonderful!!  Back to the top you go!!!  Beautiful flow and format!!!     Loved it.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
beautiful_stranger
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30 posted 05-16-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for beautiful_stranger   Email beautiful_stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beautiful_stranger

Hi, this is beautiful particularly because it can be applied to so many relationships. I decided to send it to my boyfriend to tell him he was my 'soft place'. Thanks for creating such a perfect gift to give.

Beautiful stranger
Alle'cram
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31 posted 05-17-2000 12:04 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Danny, Very well done. You pull the reader into the emotions. So, please don't take you special friend for granted. Lovely, nice.
Janet Marie
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32 posted 05-18-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Me thinks you need to work less
and write  more...ya know  

*kiss* *kiss* BEH
BEG
passing shadows
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33 posted 06-06-2004 06:51 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful
Shelley
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34 posted 11-14-2004 05:18 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

I hope the softness you found still holds true Danny!!
 
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