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PEACEMAKER
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 19
Sydney N.S.W Australia

0 posted 2000-03-13 05:48 AM



Soft
Is your touch

Sweet
Are your lips

Happens
You give in your voice

Kind
Is that look in your eyes

Loving
Is the way you are

Empty
I am when your not here

Joy
I'm full of if you are near

Problems
All disappear when i'm around you

Love
Is what i have for you

Together
I hope we'll always be

So

Never
Is when you'll part from me

-
written by peacemaker
for tahnee
i love you baba


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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2000-03-13 07:16 AM


Tahnee's a lucky girl to have someone care about her as you do... Nice sentiments here.

Welcome to Passions, Peter..

CMGrimm
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
2 posted 2000-03-13 07:28 AM


Nicely done...very sweet.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-03-13 07:35 AM


PeaceMaker~
Very nice, indeed.
Welcome to Passion's
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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