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PEACEMAKER
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 19
Sydney N.S.W Australia

0 posted 2000-03-13 12:05 PM


I feel the rain falling down
I hear it all around
Waiting here for something
How long i do not know

Why was i picked for here
What did i do wrong
I had'nt even lived that long
WHAT DID I DO WRONG

I feel hurt deep inside
But not from being cheated
Still don't know why i was picked
Or what happened before

Today they found my body
I see it from the first time
Bruised and raped
Cut and ripped at viciously
Left to lay where i fell
clothed in only blood
Now know that place was purgatory

I pity the one who did this
I have seen what waits for them
Luckily im not going there
I have been sent somewhere else


[This message has been edited by PEACEMAKER (edited 03-13-2000).]

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infinat3 sadn3ss
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85
somerset england
1 posted 2000-03-13 03:31 PM


i am glad you are now in a place where you feel content . maybe one day ill reach somewhere i feel truly happy.thankyou
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