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PEACEMAKER
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since 03-11-2000
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Sydney N.S.W Australia


0 posted 03-12-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for PEACEMAKER   Email PEACEMAKER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PEACEMAKER


Here i stand all alone
with no one here to hear me moan
i woke today
to find i lost something close to me
but not to death or oversea
i have a thirst for knowledge
with ever breath i take
you showed me something we all should know
sometimes people try to hard
i know you left with course
so i now forgive u because? of all u showed
if only you had shown me this
right from the very start
we may have been together now
you near to hear me moan

Your gentle touch, your loving voice
where like the summer breeze
all now just memories
which fell so distant from me
seeing it from other eyes
i wouldn't' change a thing
standing here all alone
no one here to hear me moan

But looking through my hart at this
i'v seen i did you wrong
i know i never filled my half
so there always was that hole
ever word u said to me
ever song you sang
used to make my laugh and smile
now all that has gone
if you sung it differently
would make me look back on
all the things i'v said and done

I need you back right by my side
to sing me one last song
and show me that you have forgiven me
even if our loves not strong
still i stand all alone
no one near to hear me moan

__________


I know you love me o so much
thats why it can not be
for you were only second best
my true love is unseen
yes i have forgiven you for all the thing your done

Now the you have sang your song
i realise me true love
i see i'v done you wrong
i know i didn't fill hey half
so there was always a hole
no specal bonds or chains we tie
not our loves not strong
im happy your forgiven me
for all i'v said and done
now i stand hear all alone

Looking for my my unseen love
when it was so near
the one place i didn't look
because i fell such a fear

__________


So here we are together strong
nothing else to fear
all that left for us to do
learn each other more
from this our love will grow
and we'll part no more
still we stand all alone
but our love has made us one



[This message has been edited by PEACEMAKER (edited 03-13-2000).]
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Astraea
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since 11-09-1999
Posts 397
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm


1 posted 03-12-2000 11:51 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Welcome to Passions!  This is a truly a lovely poem, long too, but that's okay.  It's worth it, with the talent.  Very nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


2 posted 03-13-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is quite a first entry - Check your email for a special welcome...
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
Posts 700
USA


3 posted 03-13-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Excellent 1st entry...welcome to Passions.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 03-13-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  
EagleScorpion
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since 03-08-2000
Posts 1705
Here, Now, Forever


5 posted 03-13-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

I like your poem. Welcome to the family
Martie
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
California


6 posted 03-13-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I can see your heart is in this poem.  Welcome to Passions.
Shelley
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since 01-27-2000
Posts 269
Ohio, USA


7 posted 03-13-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

What a delightful journey you have taken me on!

Welcome to Passions!
 
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