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*A Whisper Of Forever*

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devina
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0 posted 03-12-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


Foreverů
A promise
And a wish
Wrapped into
A single word.

Lovingly placed
Upon the soul
To cherish
Just as the heart beats.

Uniting two
As destiny plans
With soul-shaking passion
And weakened hand.

To drink of lips
So perfectly moist-
Just as you
Were made for me.

I whisper Forever
A promise, and a wish-
Wrapped into
A single word.




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-12-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Devina, this is so beautiful! I love it!

Denise
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2 posted 03-12-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Promise, wish, hope, dream, desire.....the whole package in one word. Excellent, devina.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 03-12-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Devina, I love your work!  Your poem touched my heart - thank you for sharing it
   Roniece    
tracie66
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4 posted 03-12-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Devina a fine piece
You have written this so beautifully


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
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devina
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5 posted 03-12-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I thank you all...tis a wonder, that thing called love!!??

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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6 posted 03-12-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
This is one of the loveliest things I've seen you write.
It speaks beyond the page.
Wonderful, my dear.
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 03-13-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Devina,

This one really spoke to me. I loved how you had the first and last lines of the poem saying the same things, as if reinforcing the "whisper". You have a wonderful talent. As always I enjoy reading your work.

AMY    

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8 posted 03-13-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Psssst. . . Devina. . . "Forever"

This was truly beautiful. . .makes me really think and brings a smile and a tear to my face. . .


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jazzgal
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9 posted 03-13-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for jazzgal   Email jazzgal   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jazzgal

i never thought of the word "forever" being as what you had just described... very powerful and moving, as usual... wonderful!
Marina
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10 posted 03-13-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

devina there is a forever for everyone,sometimes we fool ourselves into believing this is it with the wrong person. But when the right one comes along we will know it.  Another beautiful poem with sad and happy emotions mixed I think.  Look to the future...

Marina

Michael
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11 posted 03-13-2000 04:11 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Literally gasping... a whisper that seductively steals the breath, devina.  And what a wonderful wrapper too!  


Michael
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12 posted 03-15-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

No ear ever heard a sweeter whisper.
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 03-15-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Devina - I know we haven't talked in awhile, but I just want to say that I do wish you and *he* the best of luck...it does this 'ol cold heart of mine good to read what you two write back and forth to eachother...It brings back warm memories that have long faded. You two are good together, and I know you have been an inspiration to him - you both deserve love, as I consider you two to be great friends of mine.  My favorite thought, there is a reason for everything, and the timing is crucial.  I do think this time, it's right.  Good luck to you both!
Sincerely, Gen

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
poetFemmeFatale
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Geesh, I got all sappy, and forgot to tell you how beautiful this poem was!  LOL  Truly inspiring, and I loved his "comeback" poem just as much!  Love is truly *swirling* in the air!  Makes me want to go outside and catch butterflies or something crazy like that!  hehe  Sorry, maybe I should just tape my mouth shut and keep reading!  ROFL     Love ya girl!
hoot_owl_rn
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A beautiful poem Devina...forever is a long time, but when your happy, it should be forever  
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