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Open Poetry #6

A Very Few Words

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2000-03-12 07:33 PM

We're not yet half of what we'll be
No future path holds claim you'll see
Intrinsic ways divine our course
Of colors we're a different horse

Shares of gifts we part to few
Now free given nothing due
Lest befall on us my friends
What was before , repeat again

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2000-03-12 10:10 PM

I had to read this
and read it
and read it again....
A vicious cycle

and well done, it is....

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-03-12 10:19 PM

Few words that require some thought m'friend...very well done!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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