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just another rainly sunday

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Diana B
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just another rainy sunday
in my blue shadowed world
clutching out at day dreams
try to wish them real.

see your face before me
and i begin to wonder
is this a game or could this
love we have be real.

i dont think that i could take
another broken heart
for there have been too many
for me again to heal.

count the raindrops falling
on my window sill
thats how many of my tears
i shed for broken promises.

if you dont really want me
dont linger here beside me
make the ending quick
and let me die in peace.


© Copyright 2000 Diana B - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-12-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad yet beautifully done, Diana!

Denise
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nice imagery. keep writing!
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DianaB~
These are lovely lines
filled with lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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devina
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4 posted 03-12-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

There are always hard times of wondering when in love...so I'm sending you some sunshine to help you through the rain girly!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
AngelDust
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5 posted 03-12-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for AngelDust   Email AngelDust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelDust

Very sad poem, but very well written!  Things will get better Diana, they always do.  Best of luck to ya



  -Jeff Moen-

"I'll lay around and wonder why you were always there for me" - Sugar Ray - Someday

 
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