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My Beating Heart Bleeds
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My Beating Heart Bleeds |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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My Beating Heart Bleeds My beating heart bleeds when fearing someone's desperate needs. My caring mind floods drowning helplessly weeping rose buds My scared emotions quivering unable to reach destination leaving body shivering. My shaky nerves unending battling emotions helplessness attending My whole self in turmoil turned inside out hoping and praying leaving my soul to broil. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can feel the agony in this. It's true, sometimes we wish we could help but we can't. But we can pray and that is certainly something, isn't it. Great poem Gloria! Denise |
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Lady Guinevere Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 21 |
You are a wonderful person and friend Gloria. This is beautiful ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ I love the words contained in this format. Beautiful on both accounts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lots of pain in this one Gloria...I can see it clearly in your words  |
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