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My Beating Heart Bleeds

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Lost Dreamer
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My Beating Heart Bleeds

My beating heart bleeds
when fearing
someone's
desperate needs.

My caring mind floods
drowning
helplessly
weeping rose buds

My scared emotions quivering
unable to reach
destination
leaving body shivering.

My shaky nerves unending
battling
emotions
helplessness attending

My whole self in turmoil
turned inside out
hoping and praying
leaving my soul to broil.
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I can feel the agony in this. It's true, sometimes we wish we could help but we can't. But we can pray and that is certainly something, isn't it. Great poem Gloria!

Denise
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You are a wonderful person and friend Gloria. This is beautiful !
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LostDreamer~
I love the words contained in this format.
Beautiful on both accounts.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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Lots of pain in this one Gloria...I can see it clearly in your words  
 
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