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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Gossamer Gown ~*Marge Tindal*~ On gossamer gown of crimson gold the sun did kiss the night soft spun rays of ending days resting of the light sun glows and goes beyond the edge of night and in her place there comes a trace of orb with crimson gold again the moon has captured the rays of sun's goodnight kiss glowing with entrancing light feathered by the stars dancing cross the milky way all the way to mars cresting beauty I behold before she says goodnight kisses again the morning sun with rays of day's first light nature knows just how to color the beauties of our sphere I'm thankful for eternal light she shares with us all year ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Dear Marge This is a lovely poem. Especially loved.. "again the moon has captured the rays of sun's goodnight kiss glowing with entrancing light feathered by the stars dancing cross the milky way" lovely lines marge. You have such a unique, beautiful way with words in all your poetry.. always admirable From Poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Marge, this is so beautiful--just loved it..thank you for writing it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Your replies are always filled with encouragement. My heart hears the words and my eyes see the beauty in them. I paint. Martie~ It is I who thanks you for liking what I do. At sunset tonight ... again she will write her beauty for us all to behold. The sunsets have been so lovely ... there is inspiration there for all of us. I hope you take the time to share a sunset with me tonight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and you say you don't know how to push the Balladeer button? How come you keep doing it so well? This is beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Ahhhhhh ... t'would be my delight to place yon button within my sight  Glad you like ... (and you would) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful Marge, the thoughts and the presentation! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Ahhhhh .... and mother nature takes a bow ! She did it again tonight ... kissed the night with shades of her beauty ... she just wore a different hue ... shades of pink and purple touched with golden delights. Thank you for watching. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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warrior Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 11 |
wonderful maiden.......how well i remember that gossamer gown......dam you thrill me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Warrior~, my ~Warrior~ How did I KNOW you would remember? Ah ... you bring sweet memories. T'was you I had in mind when I titled it. Love to you ... ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, this is so lovely! Tis I that envy your talent, my dear! Corinne |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
The beauty in your pen always amazes me. Another excellent job! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Ahhhh ... that you enjoy it is more than enough. You are such a lovely poet and friend. Shelley~ I hope I can always amaze you. Thank you for thinking thusly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bang New Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 6 |
Wow! You are something else. My words cannot do yours justice  )Bang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bang~ Am pleased that you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Outstanding layout....It fits so nicely and with the words you use....it simply shines There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ You always find something nice to say ... this lady thanks you. Last night I highlighted this one and printed it out .... I must tell you that I was surprised at the beauty of the formatting. I am pleased that you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed doing it. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
'sigh' This is absolutely gorgeous dear Marge ... |
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PEACEMAKER Junior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 19Sydney N.S.W Australia |
my god , what am i doing posting my work here with poems like this, make mine look like drit next to a diamond well i have some work cut out for me good presentation , great poem looking forward 2 reading more from you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper~ Dearest friend ... so very glad you enjoyed. PeaceMaker~ LOL ! From the rough-cut stones to diamonds .. glad to challenge you. Thank you for liking so much. I've read yours ... great work, my friend. Enjoyed the comment muchly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thank you for your replies, always. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely Marge...a pleasure to read. James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, your words are verily a direct reflection of the beauty that finds you with each luxuriant sunset. That your heart is touched in this way by the nature before you is, to me, the true poetic expression. I thank you, in earnest, for the gifting. ~ Claire |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Speechless!!!!!! Your the first person to do that to me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Thank you. The pleasure was in the sunset. Claire~ My friend, I hold your comment dear to my heart. I'm pleased beyond words. Danny~ You truly humble me with your praise. I thank you so much. (and know, dear friends, I cry with joy) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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