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Gossamer Gown

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Marge Tindal
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Gossamer Gown
~*Marge Tindal*~

On gossamer gown of crimson gold
the sun did kiss the night
soft spun rays of
ending days
resting
of the
light
sun
glows
and goes
beyond the
edge of night
and in her place
there comes a trace
of orb with crimson gold
again the moon has captured
the rays of sun's goodnight kiss
glowing with entrancing light
feathered by the stars
dancing cross the
  
milky way
all the way to mars
cresting beauty I behold
before she says goodnight
kisses again the morning sun
with rays of day's first light
nature knows just how to color
the beauties of our sphere
I'm thankful for eternal
light she shares with
us all year





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 03-12-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Dear Marge

This is a lovely poem. Especially loved..

"again the moon has captured
the rays of sun's goodnight kiss
glowing with entrancing light
feathered by the stars
dancing cross the  
milky way"

lovely lines marge.  You have such a unique, beautiful way with words in all your poetry..
always admirable

From Poeminister

 "...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade)


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Wow!  Marge, this is so beautiful--just loved it..thank you for writing it.
Marge Tindal
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PoeMinister~
Your replies are always filled with encouragement.  
My heart hears the words and my eyes see the beauty in them.  I paint.

Martie~
It is I who thanks you for liking what I do.
At sunset tonight ... again she will write her beauty for us all to behold.  The sunsets have been so lovely ... there is inspiration there for all of us.
I hope you take the time to share a sunset with me tonight.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 03-12-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

...and you say you don't know how to push the Balladeer button? How come you keep doing it so well? This is beautiful!
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Balladeer~
Ahhhhhh ... t'would be my delight to place yon button within my sight  
Glad you like ... (and you would)
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Simply beautiful Marge, the thoughts and the presentation!  

Denise
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Denise~
Ahhhhh .... and mother nature takes a bow !
She did it again tonight ... kissed the night with shades of her beauty ... she just wore a different hue ... shades of pink and purple touched with golden delights.
Thank you for watching.
~*Marge*~


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wonderful maiden.......how well i remember that gossamer gown......dam you thrill me
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~Warrior~, my ~Warrior~
How did I KNOW you would remember?
Ah ... you bring sweet memories.
T'was you I had in mind when I titled it.
Love to you ... ~*Maiden*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,

this is so lovely!  Tis I that envy your talent, my dear!

Corinne
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The beauty in your pen always amazes me.

Another excellent job!
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Corinne~
Ahhhh ... that you enjoy it is more
than enough.
You are such a lovely poet and friend.

Shelley~
I hope I can always amaze you.
Thank you for thinking thusly.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wow! You are something else.  My words cannot do yours justice  )

Bang
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Bang~
Am pleased that you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Outstanding layout....It fits so nicely and with the words you use....it simply shines

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

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David~
You always find something nice to say ...
this lady thanks you.
Last night I highlighted this one and printed it out .... I must tell you that I was surprised at the beauty of the formatting.  
I am pleased that you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed doing it.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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'sigh'  This is absolutely gorgeous dear Marge ...  
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my god , what am i doing posting my work here
with poems like this, make mine look like drit next to a diamond
well i have some work cut out for me
good presentation , great poem
looking forward 2 reading more from you
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Pepper~
Dearest friend ... so very glad you enjoyed.

PeaceMaker~
LOL !  
From the rough-cut stones to diamonds .. glad to challenge you.
Thank you for liking so much.
I've read yours ... great work, my friend.
Enjoyed the comment muchly.  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Beautiful  
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Hoot~
Thank you for your replies, always.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is lovely Marge...a pleasure to read. James
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Marge, your words are verily a direct reflection of the beauty that finds you with each luxuriant sunset. That your heart is touched in this way by the nature before you is, to me, the true poetic expression.

I thank you, in earnest, for the gifting.

~ Claire
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Speechless!!!!!!
Your the first person to do that to me.
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