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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-03-12 11:09 AM


Just a few Haiku
From poet's pen now flowing
Haiku for showing


~*~

No sense denying
No sense, sixth or otherwise
No sense do I find


~*~

Sun, now on the run
Evening comes shadowing in
Moon does glow again


~*~

Leaves on trees let go
drifting to the ground around
falling they astound


~*~

Haiku you do me
Like you do  do  do ... again
Easy on my mind



*couldn't resist the last one
it just looked like it wanted to be played with.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-03-12 11:17 AM


Haiku you do this
Making it look so simple
With ink from your pen

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-03-12 11:25 AM


Hoot~

Haiku I want to
It simply calls out my name
Haiku back to you

Ruth .. these are such fun to play with.
I did my first one a week or so ago and now I've built a library of them.
I do try to stick to the 5-7-5 syllabic count, but deviate a little from the nature content sometimes, just for fun!
Yours ain't too shabby either.
Thanks for the laughter this morning.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-03-12 06:04 PM


Marge, these were terrific,you've done well   as always. looking forward to reading more.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



INclan
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4 posted 2000-03-12 06:07 PM


Haiku!!!
Gene
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5 posted 2000-03-12 06:09 PM


Wow! Marge, these are great.

I've also just started writing haiku about a week ago--isn't it fun?

But do i have to post them in Open #6?  I've been trying to do some in the Pub. That's where my home is now. I feel more comfortable there, away from the hustle and bustle. Please drop in.

---

INclan,  Bless you.  


~Gene



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Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-12 06:11 PM


Delightful Marge!  

Denise

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-03-12 08:05 PM


DarkAngel~

So pleased you enjoyed
They are so fun, will post more
sometime to be sure.

INclan~
U2

U_Gene~
Glad you like Haiku
Will stop by the local pub
And toss one with you

Denise~

Haiku is delight
Shared with a friend in the night
Do you Haiku too?



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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