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Crossed lines

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Iíve loved you from the very start
Didnít mean to break your heart
No matter how you think and feel
My love for you is very real.

To stray across anticipation
Cross onto contamination
The lines of trust were drawn so clear
And now the lines a gone.

To wish that thought had played a part
And stopped whit is before the start
Itís done and thereís no turning back
Iíd give my all to change it.

I guess Iíve learned what love is for
Without it life is but a whore
Looking for a way out.
Iíll pay the price for bad advice
To myself

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
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Spiked~
Owwie!  Tough lesson learned, huh?
You've expressed it well.
~*Marge*~


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spiked
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thanks marge.
Most lessons in life are hard.
We learn and move on.
Rich
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Great poem. Well written!

Denise
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Thanks Denise,
Your words are well received.
Rich
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It's so hard when trust is lost,... everything seems to turn into a never-ending battle, a constant cycle once trust has been lost the first time.  It's so difficult to gain trust back... but just keep trying and perhaps you'll be able to receive it again   good luck!
-molly aka sam

 "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide

 
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