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RobertB
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Questions to answers
distant with applause born
on waves opaque..... cataracted
eyes blinking back the light
as darkness stilled emotions
sift through fingers numb
by love enflamed of itself…
an infected wound of isolation.


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Meadowmuse
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I can sense the pleasure in store for me whenever I spy your sobriquet ...this piece holds true to form. Very nice.

~ Claire
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A very apt discription my friend. Well written.  
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow Robert...this one certainly packs a punch with it  
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Wow. I understand....great poem!
Martie
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You say so much in so few.  
Great poem!
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I agree! This is great Robert!

Denise
RobertB
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Thanks you guys.......been there done that ya know......online I mean and off.

Claire, what in the world is a sobriquet????

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Robert, sobriquet just means your byline, your pen name. Sorry 'bout that...

Wonderful writing!  

~ Claire
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Haunting music
plays from the CD at my side
tears roll gently down my cheeks,
tears I cannot hide
the world is so much larger,
cybernetically
but oh, how I wish
I could feel you dance with me.

I long to feel the length of you,
your arm around my waist
long to sway to the tune,
hands together, fingers laced
soon, the song will end,
another in it’s place
the dance will end again
without a glimpse of your face.

Dance with me tonight,
across the cyber seas
hold me in your arms,
give my hand a squeeze
close your eyes as we dance
by internet’s design
you, there in your world,
I here in mine.
RobertB
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wow PDV.....very accurate in description..

memories......
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