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Arrows That Fall On Shaky Ground
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Arrows That Fall On Shaky Ground |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Arrows That Fall On Shaky Ground Who am I? What values do I posses? Where is my station in life? How do I find it? Life is a riddle, and I am supposed to figure it out, or am I fore ever bond to not know. In my mind I carry dreams of my life, and think I may have a handle on them. The station in life I desire is not one unobtainable, and not asking of the world anything. It seems that every time I think I have accomplished a desired goal I find it has fallen on shaky ground. What is the price I have to pay in order to posses any kind of peace of mind, I believe my efforts have value. Who can say they figured out life and can tell me why what I have accomplished never seems to meet its goal. Am I fore ever to be wandering and wondering where my very carefully placed arrows will fall. By, Cerenity |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very nicely constructed...I enjoyed the concept (and title concept) of arrows having fallen on shaky ground. Quite creative work. Keep writing! ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Very well done. The idea of arrows not reaching the target of intent is fascinating. I like the whole idea of this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cerinity...only you can answer all those questions you have posed...but one word of advice...our ground is only as shakey as we let it become. If it becomes to shakey, perhaps it's time we need to build elsewhere  Hugs Ruth |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Meadowmuse, Yep, my creatively constructed concept's on life, WOW I love those words thank you very much for your reply. Hi Marge, I love hearing from you, you are so fascinating and so wonderfully surprising and as for my ideas well you never can tell with me. By the way I am working in a poem with the theme being stranded on a island or scavenger hunt and maybe you can match up the things in my poem?????? Hi hootie, You are right I was almost shaken to death so I change every thing you can imagine and it worked thank you. Most of the stuff I post is from a long time ago. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a wonderful poem, Cerenity. Very creative thinking in this one! Denise |
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