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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
SpillingAh, dreams, do not find me. Move away from the sheer slips surrounding, breathing, near to billowing in my moonlight sleep. As if in lingering, on the street beneath the lamppost's glow, my lips spilling soft whispers into your awakened ear. Your eyes, set deep, ablaze with hazel flames, speak to me with whispers of their own... not so softly.  Claire[This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 03-12-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
You do have a way to bring words to life. "Your eyes set deep, ablaze with hazel flames," I'm colorblind, but reading this, makes me wish my eyes were hazel. Beautiful work. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
...and you do, so often, say the nicest things, Mike. Thank you for reading this. (and I'm curious...even though you are colour blind, your eyes must still have a colour, yes? What colour are they?)  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Lovely. I've also gazed into those eyes ... heard the whispers through your sighs. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very very nice Claire.....I like much |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great imagery in this piece Claire...love the feel to it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I anticipate reading your poetry and am never disappointed. Wonderful! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Dear Claire, Your poetry is always so beautifully fluent and soothing to read. I liked this poem very much. From poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do so love... the way you whisper Claire  this is lovely. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, Robert, Hoot Owl, Martie, Poeminister, Janet Marie... Thank you, all, for reading, and for the kind and generous commentary. ~ Claire |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Claire, WOW....that's all I can say...you've stunned me with the blinding beauty of your words and of your soul...very well done. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Add me to the list of admirers...i can almost hear that soft whisper in my ears. Great poem as always. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Chris, I thank you for reading. (and the "wow") JML, I'm glad to know you are listening. Thank you for reading. ~ Claire |
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