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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-03-12 12:44 PM

Where you gonna go
When I’m no longer here
What are you gonna do
What are you going to fear?

I’ve given all that I can give
No longer seee the need to live
My life so filled with fear and doubt
The pains I laugh and cry about.

My dreams have always had you there
Made you and I the perfect pair
Now all is lost in deep regret
All that’s left is pale and grim
It’s all over no need to fret
The lights are getting dim.

I thought that love would see us through
And now we’re done no longer two
I’ve nothing left to say
I’m gone!

Richard Rendall

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-03-12 01:23 AM

Riding that emotional roller coaster tonight?
Smile. luv. You have got what it takes.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-03-12 01:26 AM

As alway serenity sky high and ground low.
your always there to cheer me up though.
thanx

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2000-03-12 01:31 AM

oh come on, your not gone! well, if you are, you will certainly be back

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

4 posted 2000-03-12 02:11 AM

great poem spiked i too have felt this way many times but then reality hits me hard and i realize no man/women whatever is worth ending everything over. good luck and i hope all ends well

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2000-03-12 10:24 AM

Thanks for the words of encouragement.
I'm not gone obviously just a look into how low you can feel at points in life. Written during a time of pain to express what I felt at that moment.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-03-12 10:32 AM

Spiked~
Desolate thoughts that pervade one's life from time to time ... well presented here.

You've wretched the pain and
presented it well.
Now the recovery mode kicks in.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2000-03-12 10:59 PM

Thanks Marge.
Your views are much appreciated

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