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spiked
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0 posted 03-12-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

Where you gonna go
When Iím no longer here
What are you gonna do
What are you going to fear?

Iíve given all that I can give
No longer seee the need to live
My life so filled with fear and doubt
The pains I laugh and cry about.

My dreams have always had you there
Made you and I the perfect pair
Now all is lost in deep regret
All thatís left is pale and grim
Itís all over no need to fret
The lights are getting dim.

I thought that love would see us through
And now weíre done no longer two
Iíve nothing left to say
Iím gone!



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1 posted 03-12-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Riding that emotional roller coaster tonight?
Smile. luv.  You have got what it takes.
spiked
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2 posted 03-12-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

As alway serenity sky high and ground low.
your always there to cheer me up though.
thanx
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oh come on, your not gone! well, if you are, you will certainly be back
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great poem spiked i too have felt this way many times but then reality hits me hard and i realize no man/women whatever is worth ending everything over. good luck and i hope all ends well
spiked
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5 posted 03-12-2000 10:24 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks for the words of encouragement.
I'm not gone obviously just a look into how low you can feel at points in life. Written during a time of pain to express what I felt at that moment.
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6 posted 03-12-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Spiked~
Desolate thoughts that pervade one's life from time to time ... well presented here.

You've wretched the pain and
presented it well.  
Now the recovery mode kicks in.
~*Marge*~


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Thanks Marge.
Your views are much appreciated
 
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