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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-03-12 12:36 PM


My love is like a stream
That is flowing across the rocks
As the water flows over the rocks
It cleans and purifies the stream
My love, like that stream, is pure and clear and only for you.

I often wonder how it is
That my heart will skip a beat
Whenever I am in your presence
You’re all that I can see.

The things that are around me
Are gone when you are here
You become my only focus
No others do I see.

I love you for the moment
This moment has no time
Each leading to another
No limits to define.

As long as you are here with me
All else means so much less
I have so much love to give
It’s yours I must confess

It’s like a tender poison
Flowing through my soul
Consuming all my thoughts
Taking full control.



 Richard Rendall


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-03-12 01:39 AM


"it's like a tender poison..."

If you are trying to break my heart tonight,
you're a little late...

spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-03-12 10:30 AM


Not trying just doing.
I write what I feel and all else takes care of itself.
Thanks for reading into what I Am.
That rollercoaster as you call it

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