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Little Droplets

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hailfellow
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0 posted 03-11-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for hailfellow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hailfellow

Forming clear, little droplets,
Meandering down the glass,
The drops get larger and heavier,
Falling faster, twisting less.
Hold my hand as we watch
Heavenís tears trickling by.
I see your reflection in the glass,
Droplets mask the tears you cry:

Clear, little droplets;
Getting larger and heavier;
Falling faster.  Hold my hand.
Tears will pass.

We watch the storm together;
Feel the thunder in our hearts.
The rain pours harder, faster.
Lightening skips a startled beat.
I hold you close, look at me.
The storm will soon drift by.
I see my reflection in your eyes:
Your tears mask the tears I cry.

Clear, little droplets;
Getting larger and heavier;
Falling faster.  Hold my hand.
Tears will pass.



 hailfellow
"If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense."
~Nietzsche
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tulip
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1 posted 03-11-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Hailfellow,
I loved this...nice job!
spiked
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2 posted 03-12-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Wonderfully written
I liked this very much.
thankx
Rich
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A very expressive piece of work, I especially enjoyed the first stanza.

~ Claire
hailfellow
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4 posted 03-16-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for hailfellow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hailfellow

Sorry that I haven't been back sooner, but thank you for all of the really nice comments.  It is good to hear from fellow poets.  Thanks again.



 hailfellow
"If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense."
~Nietzsche
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 03-16-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful work, with a slight tinge of sadness woven within.  Exellent job!

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


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